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cessation

cravings of form consumed me oh how I wished to be free although organic form is but dust I am torn between divine love and lust so as to become self-aware I decided to stagnate nowhere releasing each impulse as soon it arose remaining vibrant in blissful repose

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Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 9/25/2024 7:25:00 AM

Great prompt. Powerful and practical ending. It ends all problems if practiced. But not easy

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/25/2024 7:51:00 AM

Not easy for ego, so pluck it out with the tongs of silence

Kenisha Shines

Date: 9/23/2024 12:42:00 AM

beautiful poem!thank you for sharing it.Stay healthy and happy!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/23/2024 1:34:00 AM

Thank you, Kenisha :)

Valsa George

Date: 9/17/2024 9:28:00 PM

To remain vibrant in blissful repose is what is expected of us. Life is short, so never stay stagnant, but let divine energy course through us. Great line of inquiry.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/17/2024 9:46:00 PM

Ah! Exactly.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/17/2024 3:58:00 PM

So interesting how you see things,Unseeking Seeker. I enjoyed this read.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/17/2024 6:38:00 PM

does not nature too ask of us to and then do we not accordingly comply in exhaling completely without holding on to that specific packet of breath we had imbibed, whilst aware that the next breath is not promised?