Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

cessation

cravings of form consumed me
oh how I wished to be free
although organic form is but dust
I am torn between divine love and lust
so as to become self-aware
I decided to stagnate nowhere
releasing each impulse as soon it arose
remaining vibrant in blissful repose

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Rama Balasubramanian September 25, 2024 at 7:25 AM Great prompt. Powerful and practical ending. It ends all problems if practiced. But not easy Unseeking Seeker September 25, 2024 at 7:51 AM Not easy for ego, so pluck it out with the tongs of silence

Kenisha Shines September 23, 2024 at 12:42 AM beautiful poem!thank you for sharing it.Stay healthy and happy! Unseeking Seeker September 23, 2024 at 1:34 AM Thank you, Kenisha :)

Valsa George September 17, 2024 at 9:28 PM To remain vibrant in blissful repose is what is expected of us. Life is short, so never stay stagnant, but let divine energy course through us. Great line of inquiry. Unseeking Seeker September 17, 2024 at 9:46 PM Ah! Exactly.

Andrea Dietrich September 17, 2024 at 3:58 PM So interesting how you see things,Unseeking Seeker. I enjoyed this read. Unseeking Seeker September 17, 2024 at 6:38 PM does not nature too ask of us to and then do we not accordingly comply in exhaling completely without holding on to that specific packet of breath we had imbibed, whilst aware that the next breath is not promised?