Premiere Contest WinnerCerulean Serenity

Time stood still with me
on aegean beach at tiffany twilight hours,
the senile sun sank in admiral splendor 
beyond  the lap of the lapis horizon,
the cobalt sea soaked the cyan sky, 
ribboned by strands of periwinkle cloud,
blown by aquamarine breeze.
You came flying on its sapphire wings, 
slate hair kissing the teal lips, 
lacing the prussian eyes.
From the azure shadow of waves
I swam on turquoise glint of your eyes,
sank deep in your indigo heart, 
embracing me with cerulean serenity. 


Written : July 13, 2018
May 1, 2020
Contest : Strand Pick J, Any Theme, Any Form
Sponsor : Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Idudje Avatar
May 8, 2020 at 2:44 AM
Exponential Beautiful Ink Bravo! On your First Place!
Gentry Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 10:04 AM
Back to congratulate you again for your win again! :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 1:59 AM
Thank you, Susan for your revisit.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 4:43 PM
Wow, I somehow missed this incredibly beautiful poem Subimal! Congratulations on your top placement in this contest and Trophy win in the other! This blue jewel is going into my Faves! : ) xxoo
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 2:49 AM
Thank you, Connie so much.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 12:51 PM
I can't believe I haven't congratulated you on this piece yet, Subimal, gorgeous work! xomo :))
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 2:48 AM
Thank you, Maureen for your visit and appreciation.
Scars Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 11:06 AM
wow sweet Subimal! The imagery is outstandingly beautiful! I loved every word and you gave me a smile reading this! Thank you for your participation and congratulations on your top placement. :)-luloo
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 2:47 AM
Thank you, Laura for the placement.
Gentry Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 6:26 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win! So beautiful. Well done!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 4:54 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Ashley Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 5:58 PM
I was completely captivated right from your stunningly beautiful first line, Subimal. An exquisite poem. Congratulations on your wonderful trophy win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 4:53 AM
Thank you so much, Susan for your nice comments.
Allison Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 2:55 PM
fabulous title and your poem incorporated so many shades of blue, congrats on your trophy win:-) hugs Jan xx
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 4:53 AM
Thank you so much, Jan.
Pandit Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 7:20 AM
Congrats Subimal on your BIG win--with this excellent poem.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 4:52 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 5:43 AM
Beautiful, Subimal! Congratulations on your win!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 4:52 AM
Thank you, Kim.
Gauthier Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 5:42 AM
Sweet, Subimal. Congrats on your top honors.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 4:52 AM
Thank you, Line.
Marc Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 12:01 AM
Beautiful poem Subimal. Congratulations on your win!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 4:52 AM
Thank you, PM.
Dutta Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 1:40 PM
I felt the cerulean serenity. Splendid composition.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 10:50 PM
Thank you so much.
Krampe Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 8:08 PM
Lovely blue poem, Subimal. I love "cerulean serenity".
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 2:33 AM
Thank you, Agnes for your visit.
Sands Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 10:25 AM
Very nice Subimal! :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 12:53 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
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