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Ceremony of the Sand

A palmful of warm sand flowing through the fingers no words ever spoken the palm dust remains I'm thinking..into.. forever

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/21/2018 6:16:00 PM

One of the best on the list. Congrats in the contest.

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/21/2018 5:51:00 AM

Love your poem, Anthony. The title is perfect. Congrats on your well deserved win.

John Lawless

Date: 12/20/2018 9:43:00 PM

...for that moment is eternal......a magnificent visual and stirring metaphor

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/20/2018 6:22:00 PM

What a profound image you've created in just five lines. Excellent! A FAVE for me. Best wishes, Gershon

P.S. Awtry

Date: 12/20/2018 5:00:00 PM

There is something surreal about so few words taking my thoughts into infinity! Well done! Congratulations!

Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer

Date: 12/20/2018 4:36:00 PM

Beautiful and spiritual.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/19/2018 7:55:00 PM

This made my body deep sigh, so in some mystical way, my body understood, even though the rest of me is still catching up. It is not often that I sigh like this, a deep, heart-felt sigh.