Centenarian

Blue vericose veins Depends defend against stain Firey heart unchanged

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/12/2024 8:43:00 PM

Karen a great Senryu)) Last line was the best. When we are young, we think we are gods! Young people die daily. And I’ll take V. Veins rather than a bullet in this violent world we live im, Hugs, Pangie

Karen Jones
Date: 2/13/2024 1:25:00 AM

Well said Pangie and I agree! Thanks for stopping by. :0)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/12/2024 10:21:00 AM

I cannot laugh. After my bypass, I developed some varicose veins.

Karen Jones
Date: 2/13/2024 1:28:00 AM

Dear Victor as we age we all develop SOMETHING and I think we have to have a sense of humor to cope at times. God sure does. lol I finally get my head together and my butt falls apart! lol

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/11/2024 6:39:00 PM

Carly Simon didn't have a thing on you, Karen. lol. Art R. Rhee

Karen Jones
Date: 2/11/2024 8:00:00 PM

Lol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2024 9:31:00 AM

Haha. That middle line. Oh my!!

Karen Jones
Date: 2/11/2024 11:09:00 AM

lol