Centenarian

Blue vericose veins
Depends defend against stain
Firey heart unchanged
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Romios Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 8:43 PM
Karen a great Senryu)) Last line was the best. When we are young, we think we are gods! Young people die daily. And I’ll take V. Veins rather than a bullet in this violent world we live im, Hugs, Pangie
Jones Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 1:25 AM
Well said Pangie and I agree! Thanks for stopping by. :0)
Buhagiar Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 10:21 AM
I cannot laugh. After my bypass, I developed some varicose veins.
Jones Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 1:28 AM
Dear Victor as we age we all develop SOMETHING and I think we have to have a sense of humor to cope at times. God sure does. lol I finally get my head together and my butt falls apart! lol
Wolf Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 6:39 PM
Carly Simon didn't have a thing on you, Karen. lol. Art R. Rhee
Jones Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 8:00 PM
Lol
Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 9:31 AM
Haha. That middle line. Oh my!!
Jones Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 11:09 AM
lol
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