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Cemented Cocoon

Cemented Cocoon Fighting, struggling and gasping for air trying to emerge Fighting, struggling and gasping for air trying to emerge from the cocoon we call life Feeling exhausted, the cocoon ever so thick fighting, struggling and gasping for air trying to emerge through the concrete cocoon, seems impossible feeling exhausted wanting my journey through the cemeted cocoon to finally come to an end. Feeling ever more exhausted As I fight, struggle and gasp for air light begins to fill the darkness, warmth begins to flow through the bitter cold. Beginning to have hope and faith as I fight, struggle wanting to feel wamrth even more. Fighting, struggling and gasping for air. I lose hope and faith as the bitter cold returns taking my last breath of air Written by Patrick Hill August 28, 2013

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Date: 11/28/2014 8:58:00 AM
Very expressive work..Probably would classify as Free Verse..Sara..No one ever said life would be easy but we live in spite of the difficulities..
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