Celtic Tones--Dark Side of the Moon

Above a ridge, knowing not how on some parcel of a lucent dome, we meander to breathe in the vapor of moonlight , gently burying her crown upon breasts of valleys endowing a lush ritual: the great gig in the sky... of trees rustling in a prance, of a wind cascading unto a Celtic musicale, glossy lips of dandelions that speak to me through you, whisking our laughter on the run so mellow in autumn’s new eclipse. Even when jewelled stars play-- between us and them—our glides become faster, that the world heaves with us, open to love’s charm undefined by time... how we spill into a hundred portraits borne from an unrelenting joy which hours or money cannot buy...then forgetting what ancient tales have revealed : the heart with fiery ardour causes brain damage...going, going, gone! Looking up, I hear you whisper, “ Touch any color you want,” as hues change from apricot to orange. Yet before pointing to the sky, bold moonlight hides, allowing us to defrock warm kisses under her gently dark silhouette. Album Tracks Tell Stories Contest Sponsor: James Fraser 9/21/2015 Titles: Speak to Me/ Breathe, On the Run, Time, The Great Gig in the Sky, Money, Us and Them, Any Color You Like, Brain Damage, Eclipse
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October 17, 2015 at 8:50 PM
Congrats on your number 1 win Nette!
Godwin Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 1:09 AM
Congratulations! I never read this and sure missed a beauty, very poetical, indeed. Beautiful imagery, all song titles were beautifully woven in except that hard one, 'The Great Gig in the Sky' which no one successfully 'hid' in my opinion - it stands out so. Excellent ... CayCay
Konos Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 7:30 AM
Nette on Cloud 9, you're like the energizer bunny battery, you just keep on going and going....Congratulations
Kendrick Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 6:20 AM
Your “Dark Side Of The Moon” is excellent!! ((())) Congrats!! Sara
A. Sharma Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 2:23 AM
Wonderful poetic version of lovely album nette! Congrats on big win!
A  Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 10:30 PM
Nette, Congrats -SKAT-
Leiser Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 7:36 PM
Congrats on you TOP WIN, Nette!! You did a fantastic job and very creative and beautifully written, too! Yay :)
Richards Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 10:13 AM
I love the interweaving and beauty you were able to create, Nette. A big whahoo to you !!! Congratulations on a lovely poem!
Inman Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 8:27 AM
Big Pink Floyd fan. Beautiful write, Nette. Last album was rather disappointing.
Allison Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 8:01 AM
Many congrats on your top spot Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
Tor Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 5:56 AM
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN nette!
Bordner Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 7:46 PM
The love joy of this poem has made feel good about the woman I love Nette. A ritual between two hearts. You present an invigorating landscape, Allowing us to defrock warm kisses under her gently dark silhouette..." that just warms me nicely Nette...J.A.B.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 1:54 PM
very beautifully painted nette your pen flowed like the moonlight shining piece pal
Trifiatis Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 5:09 AM
It seems the moon would be mesmerized by the beauty of your writing and change her dark side to a bright one, dear Nette! A7. Good luck on the contest!
Dunn Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 10:33 PM
Dear Nette Love how you've done this with such a magical flare of beauty, and the imagery is just subperb, bravo cheri
Muideen Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 6:13 PM
I love the image you painted in this write... A well and a lovely write. Interesting......A.M.
Smith Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 4:43 PM
I like how you weave all the titles in nette.
Datu Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 3:47 PM
You've seized the magic of moonlight through this remarkable poem full of sweet passion! Nice way to finish it off with your last line--7+
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September 21, 2015 at 1:36 PM
Excellent picture with a beautiful title. Good luck in the contest. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
Godwin Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 12:04 PM
Beautiful job weaving in the titles. I enjoyed your poem ... CayCay
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