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Celluloid End

Lovers lips promise despair
The needle-
Full of poison,
Houses acid daydreams
Choices are made
This is a celluloid end.

Copyright © Melissa Ross | Year Posted 2007

deathlifelossfree verse

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November 30, 2008 at 8:24 AM

Melissa - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

November 29, 2008 at 7:53 PM

Melissa - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 18, 2008 at 8:27 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

November 11, 2008 at 8:11 AM

Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar

August 13, 2008 at 3:27 PM

Sorry for the outcome of the poem, Milissa. Perhaps the next feature will be a happier one. God Bless, Cile

August 11, 2008 at 8:56 AM

Congrats Melissa on Celluloid End being featured once again. Love, shar

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 11, 2008 at 4:26 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Melissa . Love, Carol

August 10, 2008 at 7:19 PM

Congrats on being featured this week - Being a ex-junkie my mind goes to one place when needles & Poison are mentioned - Great poem &God Bless

Vince Suzadail Jr.

August 10, 2008 at 5:12 PM

Congrats on the re-feature. Vince

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