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Cellular Reality

specks affect our view
       and vision of life is altered -
              events happen in ticks

smallest particles
       unceasingly replicates -
              time is perpetual

in whatever size
       all that matters make impact –
              truth remains unchanged






13 September 2015
Senryu on Cellular Reality
Sponsor: Marvin Celestial

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Arthur Vaso

January 31, 2016 at 11:48 PM

A belated congrats! But I liked what you did with this! So much fun to go back and read old poems! :) Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

September 20, 2015 at 2:47 PM

BIG congrats here too.

Matthew Anish

September 19, 2015 at 3:53 PM

What is that truth behind all things. Some call is it God! Stimulating write here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Kp Nunez

September 28, 2015 at 8:16 PM

Hi Matthew. Just saw that you tweaked your comment. I understand it better now. Yes, I do believe there is God. Earth and all that man found here prior to his inventions works way too much in sync with natural law to think that everything just fell into place. I believe in the biblical perspective that God created all things. Thank you. hugs!

Njeri Hunjeri

September 19, 2015 at 8:31 AM

You did so well Kim. Congratulations!

Afolabi Muideen

September 18, 2015 at 3:54 PM

Your descriptive is extreme beautiful KIM "all that matters make impact" brilliant one. Congrats on your win.......A.M.

Anindya Mohan Tagore

September 17, 2015 at 9:26 PM

Unfolding the truth with Japanese slicing ... as beautiful as enjoying Ikebana...Hugs, Bobby

Lycia Harding

September 17, 2015 at 8:59 AM

Very nice, Kimmie and structurally perfect (of course!) Congrats on your sweet win. xoxo

Kp Nunez

September 17, 2015 at 12:00 PM

Thank you, Lycia...About your comment below and suggestion...It's been a long time since I visited the blogs...lol! The last ones I've read were either at the invite of the poet or at the suggestion of another poet. You may not have noticed it but I have a tender heart. I would never deliberately offend someone and I expect the same treatment.There was one time when another poet made a wisecrack at me which I felt was totally out of order...I did not reply in kind, but I kept away as much as I can. Having said that...I still appreciate your suggestion...let me think it over. hugs!

Lycia Harding

September 17, 2015 at 9:06 AM

PS - check below under Tim Ryersons comment, I posted something there, too....

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

September 16, 2015 at 11:17 PM

Wonderful senryus Kim! Congrats on awesome win1

Marvin G. Celestial

September 16, 2015 at 7:31 PM

This is one of the best! Congratz Kim!

Kp Nunez

September 17, 2015 at 10:46 AM

Thank you so much Marvin! I actually struggle with senryu, that is why I had to remind myself time and again the rules of the form. I really appreciate this opportunity to explore the possibilities in both the subject and the form. hugs!

Viv Wigley

September 16, 2015 at 1:30 AM

Having dabbled in both, Kim, I think that sometimes Senryu is just a little trickier, but you've pulled it off beautifully. Will do well in the contest, I'm sure. Viv x

Wilma Neels

September 15, 2015 at 8:51 AM

Kim this is awesome. Each one of your senryu could hold its own. All the best for the contest ;) hugs Wilma

Tim Ryerson

September 14, 2015 at 9:47 PM

WOW Kim - What a unique idea for the contest...Deep, intelligent and philosophical. I LOVE subjects such as this and at the risk of sounding morbid, I suppose that only God and the dead know the absolute truth...

Lycia Harding

September 17, 2015 at 9:05 AM

You know what, Kim? I just happened to read this comment and I feel like you literally took the words out of my mouth. I, along with a few others, recently entered into a discussion where the exact opposite occurred and it's been bothering me... I really think you should post this subject along with this comment in a blog. It would be most refreshing.

Heather Ober

September 14, 2015 at 6:09 PM

This is an extremely clever entry for the contest! Each senryu packs a punch, but I especially love the second one. Thank you so much for your kind comment on the poem I wrote with Craig :)

Paul Callus

September 14, 2015 at 3:57 PM

Very clever, Kim! You can be quite a deep thinker when you want to! Love all these senryu, especially the final one. gl in the contest. // hugs ~ paul