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Cellophane Soul

She seemed somewhat sad
So she slid
Semi-comatose...

...Cellophane Soul screams
Saran-wrapped
Such subtle sorrow

Semi-transparent
Sweet, still sleep
She succumbs slowly

Sad Cellophane Soul
Silent screams
Suddenly strangled

Suicide succeeds
Suffering 
Cellophane Soul soars

© 2011 Kevin Stock

angstconfusionlifefree verse

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September 16, 2011 at 8:07 PM

Creative way to share the tragedy of suicide. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Karen

Elizabeth Lepapa

September 16, 2011 at 8:57 AM

good enjoyment on this.

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 12, 2011 at 9:49 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Kevin. Love, Carol

Kevin Stock

April 28, 2011 at 1:14 PM

Thank you P..d

Poet Destroyer A

April 28, 2011 at 9:44 AM

it's not of form of haiku but this is a good write, really enjoyed, try free verse im not too sure on the form either,...p..d

Kevin Stock

April 25, 2011 at 5:13 AM

I put Haiku on this, but it doesn't fit the true 5-7-5 format. Is there a better form description for this? I was thinking there was a form regarding a poems words all starting with the same sound, but not sure. I have not studied forms nor do I usually write according to a form, the poem usually dictates how it's written and I hope it fits into one of the forms on here as it seems important for some reason on this site. Help!

Cellophane Soul

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