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Rispetto
The rispetto lyric is generally composed of eight hendecasyllabic (11-syllable) lines. In its earliest form the rhyme scheme was usually abababcc however ababccdd is now more prominent.

Frost feathers the outside of the windowpane, and my silly kitty tries to scratch the ice. The frozen swirls look like crinkled cellophane, come lay here with me silly kitty, be nice. Let's snuggle together and watch it take form, come over here kitty, where it's nice and warm. Mom said it's okay for you to sleep with me, as long as you use your litter box to pee. (Rispetto) 09,04,2019 Pic # 1 Free Verse or Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Date: 9/11/2019 3:56:00 PM
I sometimes come back to reread the poems and again enjoy how they make me feel. Thank you again.. Hugs Eve
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/11/2019 6:22:00 PM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/9/2019 5:36:00 PM
absolutely charming Emile and I love the humour in the final stanza:-) hugs Jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/10/2019 7:35:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/9/2019 5:21:00 PM
Congratulations on first place in the contest, Emile. I love the last line. Hugs Eve
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/10/2019 7:34:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your support and my placement my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/9/2019 1:09:00 PM
- Congratulations on your topp win, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/10/2019 7:33:00 AM
Thanks Sunshine, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.