Constance La France Poet Rhyme

Cell Phones Are Dangerous - Dk

 
Ever notice some looking at a cell phone,
while they are walking along-   they just keep on talking;
or they are just looking and detached- and all else is unknown,
I watch them from my balcony getting off the bus and walking.

Now, the winding pathway into my building is quite dangerous,
it has many bumps and uneven surfaces, dips and cracks;
a guy on his cell was walking this path treacherous,
DUMBSTRUCK- he falls still looking at the cell phone as he smacks !

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August 14, 2021


Poetry/Rhyme/Cell Phones are Dangerous - DK
Copyright Protected, ID 08-1380-965-14
All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France

Written for the Premier contest, Dumbstruck
sponsor, Charlie Messina, Judged 08/29/2021

Eighth Place

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Paula Goldsmith August 29, 2021 at 8:38 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. No cell phones when walking and driving. What did people do before the cell phones???? Call when they got home. We were smarter then. Have a blessed day............. Constance La France August 29, 2021 at 12:44 PM Paula, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment, your comment is so true ~ love and serenity _Constance

Charles Messina August 29, 2021 at 5:50 AM Constance, what would we do without cell phones in today's world. Unfortunately, there have been so many accidents and tragedy's caused by them. Congratulations on a fine win! Charlie Constance La France August 29, 2021 at 6:41 AM Charlie, thank you for the contest and my placement, your comment and congratulations, I find some people use the cell phone as a crutch, a way to withdraw ~peace and tranquility _Constance

Rico Leffanta August 14, 2021 at 12:14 PM The peak of stupidity is looking at one's cellphone instead of the traffic when crossing the street in a pedestrian crossing in Hawai'i (or Rome)! Constance La France August 15, 2021 at 8:18 AM Rico, thanks for visiting my poem and commenting, I agree that is really stupid ~ Constance

L Milton Hankins August 14, 2021 at 9:18 AM (chuckle) Some people just never learn, do they? My pet peeve is when they are driving and looking at their cell phone. You can see them weaving all over the road. Crazy! Constance La France August 15, 2021 at 8:19 AM Milt, thanks for visiting and commenting, yes I have seen people doing that, the is really stupid ~ Constance

Jan Allison August 14, 2021 at 8:16 AM made me smile Constance as its a bit of a pet hate of mine too, cant take their hands/ keep their eyes off the mobiles for a second , good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Constance La France August 15, 2021 at 8:21 AM Jan, thanks for visiting and commenting, yes, I am bewildered how people cannot function without a cell in their hand and to be constantly looking at it ~ Constance