Celestial War

unexploded shell
   soldiers trying to defuse
   silence now departs
   leaving them no time to lose
   heaven fights again with hell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Petersen Potter Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 4:33 AM
Great pen George! Much enjoyed your tanka,dear friend. A 7! Thanks for sharing. Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :-) D.
Seal Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 2:39 PM
Hi Dorian, i do appreciate your kind comment on my poem. Thankyou so much. George.
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 12:19 PM
Excellent Tanka George:-) hugs jan xx
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March 26, 2015 at 2:34 PM
Hello Jan, so glad you liked this one. Thankyou. George.
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