Celestial Soda Pop

Strolling today a gorgeous rainbow
Dazed me, raised eyes only to see
God's gentle prism of raindrops
Touching my own body
Cascades of softness
All around me
I was blessed
By God's
Rain


        April 3, 2020
         
        12:30am PST


          Nonet Form
       9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Theraven Avatar
April 5, 2020 at 4:10 PM
Panagiota, A blessing in kinder droplets with the promise of a rainbow. I've missed the romps in verse from better days. Enjoyed them while they lasted. Let the Good times roll again! -Richard
Romios Avatar
April 5, 2020 at 4:38 PM
Hey! Can you please Soupmail me and be specific ....about the romps! Panagiota xx
Smith Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 5:03 PM
Just a reminder that he still cares...
Romios Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 5:12 PM
Absolutely true, Charlie! Panagiota xx
Leffanta Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 1:33 PM
I always wondered how baptisms became a religious act. Well done! Aloha! Rico
Romios Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 1:38 PM
Rico! You are a clever one, indeed. Thank you for visiting. Rainbow wishes, Panagiota xx
Gilmour Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 5:59 AM
Gorgeous rainbows are so magical with colours exquisite and each time I see one it mesmerises me, just like your glorious poem dear Panagiota - thank you dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Romios Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 6:07 AM
You are my rainbow, Ann. Whenever I think of you I smile. Irene, meows ! I am up most of this night. Please check your Soupmail! Time for a racouus Samba, Ann! Don't you agree? Rainbow wishes, Panagiota xx
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