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Celestial Skies

You
shine
for me
forever,
yes, I remember.
Your eyes hypnotize stargazers.
White-silken moonlight nestles in the warmth of your smile;
every night I ride your celestial-spun skies rising and falling from my restless dreams.

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Poet Destroyer A

March 20, 2015 at 10:50 PM

Rhonda, Congratulations on your awesome Fibonacci win :):):) Luv ~LINDA~

Sara Kendrick

March 18, 2015 at 9:16 AM

Congrats on this wonderful winning work..Passionate..Sara

Kim Merryman

March 17, 2015 at 5:20 PM

Rhonda, congrats on your win with this beautiful poem! I love the poetic language! Love, Kim

Debbie Guzzi

March 17, 2015 at 8:54 AM

Astral gliding! Congratulations on your win. Light & Love

Casarah Nance

March 16, 2015 at 8:34 AM

Wow that is out of this world! Nicely done on your win!

Skat A

March 15, 2015 at 11:50 PM

RHONDA, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Fibonacci WIN! ~SKAT

Eve Roper

March 15, 2015 at 10:59 AM

Congratulation on this wonderful win and a 7

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

March 15, 2015 at 7:38 AM

Beautiful poetry, Rhonda. Congratulations on your win with these captivating words. Big Smiles, Dane Ann

Paul Callus

March 15, 2015 at 7:29 AM

Very lovely contents that flatter this poetic form, Rhonda. A treat for stargazers! Congrats on a worthy win. All the best. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

March 15, 2015 at 12:49 AM

Wonderful Rhonda! Congrats on big win!

Rob Carmack

March 14, 2015 at 8:34 PM

Rhonda, this is one beautiful work. Congrats.

Jan Allison

March 14, 2015 at 8:28 PM

dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) Hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

March 14, 2015 at 7:58 PM

Hi Rhonda, stopping back to say congratulations to you for your nice win on your lovely poem. Hugs, Sandra

Kim Shaw

March 14, 2015 at 7:38 PM

Big congrats on your win, Rhonda!! Very lovely. Hugs, Kimberly xx

Frederic Parker

March 12, 2015 at 6:44 PM

my first thought after reading this was I just read a poem that was poetry...I read a lot of poems but not as much poetry...this is poetry

David Meade

March 12, 2015 at 1:10 PM

I like the shape of the poem, the building of words, images, sights, sounds, smell . . . I found myself outside with a warm breeze searching these heavenly skies . . . wonderful and satisfying. 7

Poesy Relish

March 11, 2015 at 3:33 PM

Very romantic Rhonda... best for the contest.. hugs,nad

Andrea Dietrich

March 10, 2015 at 6:08 PM

a very romantic one, dearie!! I gotta post one fast!!

Sandra Haight

March 10, 2015 at 5:34 PM

Hi Rhonda, such lovely, romantic imagery that glides by so smoothly with your well-chosen words. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Dorian Petersen Potter

March 10, 2015 at 4:33 PM

Very nice pen Rhonda! Very pretty thoughts you've written here. A 7 from me ! Thank you so much for visiting and commenting on my poetry.Always much appreciated Rhonda! I haven't been online much, still ill barely recovering now a bit. I've been very sick with a very severe flu and cold, I hardly have a normal voice to talk with. For almost 4 weeks not able to talk much. My voice barely returning but at times. Have a very lovely day! In his light! God bless! :) hugs!D.