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Celestial Sensations

sun bids her farewell with a final curtain call reds and mauves to thrill venus then twinkles with diamonds full of love sprinkled from above moon crescent in view luna love forevermore takes my breath away Written 4th June 2020 Contest Name Fresh Traditional HAIKU (5-7-5) Sponsor JCB Burl 2nd PLACE Contest A BRIAN STRAND JULY 24 Sponsor Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Kim Merryman

Date: 7/26/2021 7:17:00 PM

Ann, I love the fanciful imagery in your haiku! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/27/2021 12:08:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim for your lovely words and congrats. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/26/2021 1:24:00 AM

Beautiful imagery. Congratulations!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/26/2021 4:14:00 AM

Bless you dear Christuraj ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/8/2020 12:20:00 AM

Lovely imagery, Ann ~

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/8/2020 1:02:00 AM

Thank you dear Line ~ with with kindest thoughts Ann xx

L. J. Carber

Date: 6/7/2020 10:53:00 AM

I like these, and in that order too--congrats on your win, Ann

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/7/2020 2:42:00 PM

Ohhh thank you very much LJ, I am so pleased you enjoyed them - I enjoyed writing them. Thanks for your encouraging comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jcb Brul

Date: 6/7/2020 9:26:00 AM

Lovely piece! Congratulations!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/7/2020 2:41:00 PM

Thank you so much JCB for your contest and my placement in it. I do appreciate the time and effort when sponsoring them and I thank you. I really enjoyed writing them as I am rather obsessed by anything in outer space and on a clear night I have been known to gaze at the moon for hours, haha. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison

Date: 6/6/2020 4:36:00 PM

wonderful imagery Ann, the middle one is my personal favourite, I would have loved to see this placed higher:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/7/2020 1:14:00 PM

Dearest Jan, Venus has been stunning in the night sky but sadly we have lost her for a while, but she will be back... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/6/2020 12:38:00 PM

This is an enchanting romance blended with beauty. Loved the imagery for Venus and moon. Congratulations on your win Ann :)

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/7/2020 1:09:00 PM

Many thanks dear Aditi for your wonderful comments and I too love Venus and the Moon and can gaze at them for hours. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/6/2020 2:44:00 AM

The second haiku was my favorite. ANN, very romantic. Wishing you the best of luck. Linda

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/7/2020 12:51:00 PM

Thank you so much Linda so glad you enjoyed it ~ yes I always love to see Venus she is the brightest and prettiest in the sky and I can't take my eyes off her on a clear night. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/4/2020 9:32:00 PM

Lovely haikus, dear friend. Best for a win and blessings sent your way... Much love and prayers, Gina

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/7/2020 12:44:00 PM

Bless you Gina for your encouraging message ~ I thank you my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/4/2020 2:37:00 PM

Hi from 105 degree California. What's interesting, Ann, is your haikus are so very much like you. The sunset was gorgeous here last night. I wrote about that in one of my latest poems. Haikus are so awesome. This will be fab contest. Enclosed are wishes for a win, poetess. Love, Panagiota xoxo

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/4/2020 2:49:00 PM

Thank you dearest friend, such a sweet thing to say. I am struggling to keep up with some of my favourite poets, but I will go straight to your poem about the sunset for sure... I agree that this contest is going to be so beautiful it will be nigh impossible to place such sparkling gems. 105 degrees ~ phew that is just tooooo hot...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/4/2020 2:34:00 PM

Beautiful celestial images you painted Ann in brilliant brushstrokes.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/4/2020 2:45:00 PM

Wow Vijay, that sounds so pretty ~ thank you... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/4/2020 1:29:00 PM

Love those celestial images Ann, there is so much to see above us. Hope our summer comes back, it's like winter again. Good luck in the contest Tom

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/4/2020 1:42:00 PM

Well I started the Haikus yesterday, but then had a senior moment and forgot to finalise, and it was not until I saw your beauties today that I remembered mine, so only just made the contest - phew! Thanks Tom. Weather here is very humid with just a little drizzle over night, but I am so used to seeing blue sky and sunshine everyday, so I hope it returns soon. Good luck to you to my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx