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Celestial Meanderings

perusing skyward on crisp, lucent nights a symphony plays, strumming ancient light on vernal heart strings who can perceive these melodies, seeming to muse the tantric soul… pondering astral notes through tired eyes i feel twelve Years young Date: 15 May 2020 Contest : Diminished Hexaverse Poetry Contest Sponsor : Emile Pinet

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Date: 1/14/2021 1:40:00 AM
Quite lovely. I especially loved the 2nd verse.
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Date: 5/23/2020 5:19:00 PM
This is soothing David! Astral melodies and muses that seem divine making you feel young... Congratulations :)
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Date: 5/22/2020 4:15:00 PM
Congratulations David! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest by successfully catching my attention, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 5/15/2020 8:48:00 PM
I have heard the sky. This is lovely David. My best to you in the contest. ~mo
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