David Mohn Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Celestial Meanderings

perusing skyward
 on crisp, lucent nights
    a symphony plays,
strumming ancient light
 on vernal heart strings

    who can perceive
      these melodies,
    seeming to muse
     the tantric soul…

         pondering  
        astral notes
    through tired eyes 

             i feel
        twelve Years
 
            young


Date: 15 May 2020
Contest : Diminished Hexaverse Poetry Contest
Sponsor : Emile Pinet

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Jenna Logan January 14, 2021 at 1:40 AM Quite lovely. I especially loved the 2nd verse.

Aditi Mishra May 23, 2020 at 5:19 PM This is soothing David! Astral melodies and muses that seem divine making you feel young... Congratulations :)

Emile Pinet May 22, 2020 at 4:15 PM Congratulations David! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest by successfully catching my attention, well done my friend, Emile.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 15, 2020 at 8:48 PM I have heard the sky. This is lovely David. My best to you in the contest. ~mo