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Celestial Jewels of Night

As sunset fades to darkest night the stars awaken and come to life. Thousands of the celestial jewels, adorn the black velvet sky, twinkling with pure delight. And there in luminous allure, is the queen of the moonlit night; the full and golden wanton moon, wooing lovers with her mystical light. Beneath full moon's glow under canopy of stars lovers pledge their troth yielding to love's siren call magic dwells in moonlit nights. 8/13/16 "It Takes Four" Crystalline - 2 unrhymed lines 8/9 syllables or 9/8 syllables Kimo - 3 unrhymed lines, 10/7/6 syllables Quatrain - 4 lines, line 2 & 4 rhyme Tanka - 5 unrhymed lines, 5/7/5/7/7 syllables

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Date: 8/23/2016 10:49:00 AM
Kim, Congratulations on your win enjoyed reading Hugs Eve
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/24/2016 10:32:00 AM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 8/22/2016 1:15:00 PM
Kim, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem ~
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/24/2016 10:32:00 AM
Thank you, Constance. I am thrilled and honored by my placement.
Date: 8/22/2016 12:22:00 PM
Kim, so beautiful lady...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/24/2016 10:30:00 AM
Thank you, Laura.
Date: 8/14/2016 10:56:00 AM
at last, I am caught up on comments again with you as my last to see!! Let me read this one now.....It's always nice to see the night so emulated, Kim. Love your metaphor of the moon. goddess moon is a beauty.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/19/2016 3:37:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I'm trying to catch up on my comments, too.
Date: 8/14/2016 8:43:00 AM
Coming to make sure I gave you a seven:-)Alexis
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/19/2016 3:36:00 PM
Thanks!??
Date: 8/14/2016 8:41:00 AM
Hi Kim, This is a good entry for the contest. You have painted a beautiful picture with words. I really liked what I saw. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A Big seven:-)Alexis
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/19/2016 3:35:00 PM
Thank you for your encouraging comment, Alexis!
Date: 8/14/2016 7:22:00 AM
- Moon light is beautiful and romantic ..... a lovely poem, Kim :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/19/2016 3:34:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! My tablet changed the I in your name to an o.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/19/2016 3:33:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lose!
Date: 8/14/2016 6:37:00 AM
The magic made in the poem with words is indeed beautiful ...
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/19/2016 3:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Probir!

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