Celestial Fantasia





She awoke on a moving silver cloud,
God’s winds, not even made one sound.
Sail sweetly to your rainbow paradise.
Gold sunscapes are your soul’s magic surprise.

Under a silk umbrella painted with stars,
Her jasmined, joy-spirit blessing Mars.
Through dreamy mists, she serenely sailed.
Winged poetess, you have never once failed!


                        

                       8/2/2022
                           ~1~


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Goldsmith Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 1:03 PM
Your "CELESTIAL FANTASIA" is a creative/fun write. What a fun/magical trip I just took on your silver cloud. Have a fun/great/blessed day writing away..............
Romios Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 1:19 PM
Hi Paula! Oh so that was you I saw flying by my window, eh? Lol …thought you looked familiar! Glad you liked this and did let me know! You are a gift, you know? Hugs, Panagiota xx
Eagle Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 7:40 PM
This is beautifully written. Your poetry is a joy to read.
Romios Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 10:17 AM
Hello Elena and thank you for saying my poetry enjoyed to read! I did try my best to make it beautiful and thank you for saying so, Panagiota XXX
Roper Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 7:34 PM
A poet you are my friend.
Romios Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 10:14 AM
My dearest Eve, I wish I had the same confidence in my poetry that you do! I am very harsh with myself about my writing. I think everyone else is far better and I am at the bottom of the scale. This morning I thought about never writing again! I hope I get over Feeling like this. Panagiota XXX
Baker Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 8:26 AM
What a trip! Thanks for the ride share, my poetess fair. Very creative I do declare. Nice imagery and a fun trip, Panagiota. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Romios Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 8:33 AM
Oh,great Bill! I don’t charge for these travels! . Glad the imagery was good, too. The space poetess, Panagiota xxx
Cunningham Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 8:03 AM
You take the reader on a magical journey Pangie. Tom
Romios Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 8:31 AM
Tom! I like your choice of words. How sweet. Thank you.. Panagiota xxx
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