Patrycjusz Kopec Poet Rhyme

Celestial Beacon

By surreal almost supernatural celestial mist
The dream starship is kissed
The wave of light the starship will assist
In penetrating the awe inspiring mist

When by curious mind thought is formed
Many miracles can be performed
The ideas like billows through the sea will have stormed
 What if something similar that by definition is not a thought of its existence informed

Something that to thought what thought to vacuum is
Like a probe deep in celestial abyss
Continuing this line that will never cease 
The last most bizarre force will lead to nirvana like bliss

However its very existence now is a thought
So what would be formed by the line beyond thought?
Maybe the visage of God dancing gavotte 
Maybe soul of the ancient time forgot

The universe must stay in balance of course
But what if free will and balance of judgment were at cross course 
The explosion of power would arise from their divorce 
Could such power and lines it would create be used as a resource?

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Skat A February 10, 2014 at 2:48 PM Patrycjusz, what a thought... Interesting... SKAT

Vicky Tsiluma February 9, 2014 at 10:03 PM Wow Patrycjusz! This is an outstanding, thought provoking, well delivered poem. I love how you tackle the theme and ask the hard questions. What comes after the thought? I would say just the fact that thought exists attests to the existence of free will, what we do with the free will is what makes judgment just or unjust. You've really brought it out very well.