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Celestial Beacon

By surreal almost supernatural celestial mist The dream starship is kissed The wave of light the starship will assist In penetrating the awe inspiring mist When by curious mind thought is formed Many miracles can be performed The ideas like billows through the sea will have stormed What if something similar that by definition is not a thought of its existence informed Something that to thought what thought to vacuum is Like a probe deep in celestial abyss Continuing this line that will never cease The last most bizarre force will lead to nirvana like bliss However its very existence now is a thought So what would be formed by the line beyond thought? Maybe the visage of God dancing gavotte Maybe soul of the ancient time forgot The universe must stay in balance of course But what if free will and balance of judgment were at cross course The explosion of power would arise from their divorce Could such power and lines it would create be used as a resource?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/10/2014 2:48:00 PM
Patrycjusz, what a thought... Interesting... SKAT
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Date: 2/9/2014 10:03:00 PM
Wow Patrycjusz! This is an outstanding, thought provoking, well delivered poem. I love how you tackle the theme and ask the hard questions. What comes after the thought? I would say just the fact that thought exists attests to the existence of free will, what we do with the free will is what makes judgment just or unjust. You've really brought it out very well.
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