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Celestial Angel To His Poet Mom




                 Celestial Angel to His Poet Mom
                            8/26/2023
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                 I was to be your son, Mommy!
                 But things went so very wrong,
                 Now, without you, singing angels’ songs.
                 Don’t worry, they do and fill my tummy.

                 In a few months, I will learn to crawl.
                 For now, they transport me with wings,
                 I bet you never saw such gossamer things.
                 They are shiny and when spread, sprawl!


                  They took this photograph of me.
                  A quite dashing fellow, don’t you think?
                  I’d am quite a looker , hardly a kink.
                  At night, I watch you pen heavenly poetry!


                   Love you Mom, your awaiting cherub!

                           


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Lindley Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 4:13 AM
A beautiful, very tender and fabulously sweet poem my good friend. Definitely another fav for me. God bless you...
Bowring Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 8:14 PM
Such a tender, sweet, loving poem Panagiota. Love the second stanza especially. So very touching. Thought provoking. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.
Romios Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 4:00 AM
Good morning from California. It is a blessing to come here ..and find you can touch the heart of another soul. Thank you for acknowledging the good in me, Christine! I,I have seen both fathers and mothers cry over a lost child. From Road to me, but don’t make it public and post about that. It is a silent wound that never goes away.. what is the babies are with the Lord and angels. I am so glad you said you liked the second stanza. I just reread it and wonder who wrote that. Well, I did sometimes I don’t realize the power of my words you give me curse to keep on expressing myself, even if others don’t like it that’s a big gift and I thank you for it.)))))) God be with you always. I hope I see you again!…Panagiota.xx
Goldsmith Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 2:18 PM
A wonderful write/picture. I really enjoyed it. Both my mom and aunt lost their baby. I tell about my aunt in my "Angelic " write. Have a blessed/great day.............
Romios Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 3:42 PM
Oh, gee, sorry to know about that, Paula, PS corrections, done. PR
Eagle Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 12:04 PM
Life is precious from conception. When will we learn that? I liked this piece.
Romios Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 1:14 PM
Glad you are sane! Not one poet here would be writing, if their Mothers ended their lives. I am sorry for those women who lost babies through no fault of their own. Hitler got the idea of abortion from the USA. Such a horrid man, and here we are today, practicing Sanger and Hitler’s principals. No need to point fingers at the Nazis, why? We are like him singing “ Give Peace a Chance?” We are hypocrites, Thank you..Pangie
Fisher Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 5:33 PM
Ahhh, this is such a touching story. The first line is so sad, but it sounds like so much goodness is realized anyways. And he's watching over you, what a familial touch.
Romios Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 7:41 PM
Yes David, many pietMoms have lost cgi,dren, they never got to see pr hold them. It’s really sad. I didn’t even think of the power of the first line, It seems now like it should be in quotation marks? Your honesty in comments is not typical..Wfat I mean is you do not run over my words, I loathe being read like a speed bump wit a snippet A true comment is more than one to three words. With gratitude…Pangie
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 3:29 PM
Hello Panagiota, a baby angel, this is cute. I lie the way the baby angel talks to his mother. Hugs. /Darlene\ xxx
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 11:25 AM
Hello Panagiota, yes moms do lose their babies. Your welcome Panagiota I am pleased I booted your soul. Thank you. Hugs. xxx /Darlene\
Romios Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 7:23 PM
Hello Darlene,, I too. Liked the baby watching over his Mom as she write…moms do lose babies, how sad that must be. I appreciate your friendship and your constant commenting that really gives a boost to my soul. I liked your pie as well Hugs, Pangie xx
Roper Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 2:32 PM
Very good. Baby angels.
Romios Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 2:56 PM
Hi dear Eve,,,,ithe image has ve added! Tha l you for taking time out of your day to read and comment. Hugs, Pangie
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