Jaymee Thomas Poet Rhyme

Celebration of a Friend - Minichu

Celebrate life as death;
names iced across cakes with love as carved on gravestone—
covet breadth.

Reap or romance;
same chance to see flames, cheer, lie prone.
Our dance,

on clouds—
candles blown.
Crowds.

Celebrate life as death;
same chance to see flames, cheer, lie prone.
Crowds.

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Sara Kendrick January 31, 2024 at 2:28 AM Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler January 30, 2024 at 7:23 AM A sweet remembrance and celebration. Nicely done! Congratulations Jaymee! :)

Mohan Chutani January 29, 2024 at 7:00 PM Jaymee, thanks for participating in my contest. a very deep imagery of celebration of death which is an inevitable end to physical form of life but that liberates the soul for another abode. Congratulations for your placement. Wishing you best for New Year and times ahead. Mohan. Jaymee Thomas January 30, 2024 at 3:34 PM So kind of you to say something. I really enjoy this form although it frustrates me to no end :D I appreciate the placement too - it's always nice to wake up to good news!

Mystic Rose Rose January 13, 2024 at 3:18 PM A deep and reflective poem that reveals the state of the heart while living, it was a pleasure reading your verse tonight :)