Celebration

blessings from above

showers of pink blossom rain

nature's confetti



** A spring senryu
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Goff Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 1:49 PM
yes! fine imagery! Sharon! jmg
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June 22, 2010 at 5:27 AM
Congrats on your win, Sharon! This is a wonderful senryu! Kisses, Emily
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June 21, 2010 at 5:40 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Sharon. Love, Carol
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June 20, 2010 at 8:52 PM
I love the idea of the pink blossoms in the rain being looked at as confetti for nature. Wonderful image! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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June 19, 2010 at 1:18 PM
What an uplifting view. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on placing second in Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Karen
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 12:49 AM
btw, I thought I had faved you but just checked and discovered I had not. Sorry if I told you earlier and then forgot to do it. It's gonna go down right NOW.
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June 17, 2010 at 10:45 AM
Congrat on your well deserved win,very original and beautiful Shar!C
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2010 at 7:05 AM
Congratulation, Sharon. It was a shoe in! (what does that expression mean anyway? or is it shoo in? haha) YOu have got to try Rondeau. I have dozens and dozens of them now. I know from your style, you will adore them! LUv, Andrea
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June 16, 2010 at 9:48 PM
Very good one! Nature's confetti is a great line. congrats on your win!
Sweetheart Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 8:43 PM
Congrats Sharon on your success in my contest .. a very creative write... thankxxx for your support ..with luv.. Linda-Marie..
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June 16, 2010 at 8:06 AM
Spring is in the air. I can see it clearly through the imagery in this poem. Great job! Joseph
Dietrich Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 9:42 PM
Delightful and pretty. And how nice you ALSO have a teddy bear sonnet. And do you have a sonnet on a stinky sink? I have one of those too. hahaha. I think I have a sonnet on everything under the sun! Thanks for the teddy bear tale! Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 8:25 PM
A wonderful entry in the contest. Good luck, Sharon
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June 15, 2010 at 4:55 PM
What a lovely view. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Karen
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June 15, 2010 at 4:04 PM
What a beautiful haiku, Sharon! "Nature's confetti" is a great line. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carolyn
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June 15, 2010 at 3:44 PM
Hi Sharon, Soup Mail for you >> James
Fraser Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 2:39 PM
Sharon, I have an apple tree in the garden and it's pink blossoms are just beautiful. The Japanese Sukara trees are also so beautiful, as is this Senyru >> James
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