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Celebrating a Birth

Isn't life a joy beyond imagining 
When a child is born to us?
Can there be any greater happening 
When families become a chorus?
Oh sweet melody of life's golden symphony 
Pregnant seasons birthing spring 
Nothing can compare to the cacophony 
Of a baby when first she sings.
Look: she smiles, she beams,
Her eyes seraphic twinkle, deep blue-green,
Enchanting, magically enticing, endearing, 
Urging her mother to a hug, a kiss
Soft as the early sun on her puffy cheeks.
Captivating, she melts the heart,
Then strikes, straight at the delicious milk 
Of her mother's full sweet breast.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Legros Kelley Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 11:04 PM
Oh, what a beautiful write about life's most beautiful gift! Such a sweet poem Victor!
Daniel Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 3:26 AM
Love this write, Victor, am faving it:) nothing beautiful and captivating as a new born child:)
Edmonds  Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 8:18 PM
The most beautiful gift to the world is the birth of a baby boy or girl. A lovely poem Victor… Hugs, Belle
Kendrick Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 1:44 PM
Ahhh!! A baby add so much to a home. They seem to bring everyone back to life. Thanks for the visit to my p age. Sara
Andresen Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 1:15 PM
- Nothing is more beautiful ... love it, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Skelly Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 6:29 AM
A beautiful poem on the gift of life…Delice
Jayasankar Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 10:23 PM
Aww... So sweet... Nothing like watching a baby's twinkling eyes, cute smile, sure they melt our heart... and spread magic... A FAV... ~ Ani
Cholt Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 4:05 PM
Beautiful poem. You have captured the essence and joy of birth/life in a very powerful and descriptive fashion.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 8:55 AM
What a beauty is this! Love the shock of the final two lines! For that is motherhood in its beauty! Men are jealous of her who can experience the depth of a shared drink. God bless ya!
Roper Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 8:46 AM
Well described verse, babies are beautiful and so wanting. Hugs eve
Seeker Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 8:16 AM
Hmmm … you’ve taken us right there, in the midst of tender togetherness
Buehler Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 7:44 AM
Reading this sweet verse is a wonderful way to start my day! Exceptional writing, Victor. :)
Pandit Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 6:36 AM
I hear and see the baby through your gifted words, Victor. You created baby's movements perfectly. Excellent write!
Poet Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 4:42 AM
There is nothing better than having a new baby around, and as older men, we always wish in such situations that our ticking clock would go back a few years, but that is impossible. Victor, I wish you a very happy birthday and many more years of good health and happiness.
Gilmour Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 2:37 AM
Wow Victor this poem truly stole my heart with your fabulous words ~ "when a baby first sings" a delightful phrase, as are so many more. A FAVE for me my friend ~ thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Cunningham Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 2:22 AM
Nothing more beautiful Victor than the birth of a child, a gift from God. Tom
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