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Isn't life a joy beyond imagining When a child is born to us? Can there be any greater happening When families become a chorus? Oh sweet melody of life's golden symphony Pregnant seasons birthing spring Nothing can compare to the cacophony Of a baby when first she sings. Look: she smiles, she beams, Her eyes seraphic twinkle, deep blue-green, Enchanting, magically enticing, endearing, Urging her mother to a hug, a kiss Soft as the early sun on her puffy cheeks. Captivating, she melts the heart, Then strikes, straight at the delicious milk Of her mother's full sweet breast.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 10/9/2021 11:04:00 PM
Oh, what a beautiful write about life's most beautiful gift! Such a sweet poem Victor!
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Date: 9/12/2021 3:26:00 AM
Love this write, Victor, am faving it:) nothing beautiful and captivating as a new born child:)
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Date: 9/10/2021 8:18:00 PM
The most beautiful gift to the world is the birth of a baby boy or girl. A lovely poem Victor… Hugs, Belle
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Date: 9/10/2021 1:44:00 PM
Ahhh!! A baby add so much to a home. They seem to bring everyone back to life. Thanks for the visit to my p age. Sara
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Date: 9/10/2021 1:15:00 PM
- Nothing is more beautiful ... love it, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/10/2021 6:29:00 AM
A beautiful poem on the gift of life…Delice
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Date: 9/9/2021 10:23:00 PM
Aww... So sweet... Nothing like watching a baby's twinkling eyes, cute smile, sure they melt our heart... and spread magic... A FAV... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/9/2021 4:05:00 PM
Beautiful poem. You have captured the essence and joy of birth/life in a very powerful and descriptive fashion.
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Date: 9/9/2021 8:55:00 AM
What a beauty is this! Love the shock of the final two lines! For that is motherhood in its beauty! Men are jealous of her who can experience the depth of a shared drink. God bless ya!
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Date: 9/9/2021 8:46:00 AM
Well described verse, babies are beautiful and so wanting. Hugs eve
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Date: 9/9/2021 8:16:00 AM
Hmmm … you’ve taken us right there, in the midst of tender togetherness
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Date: 9/9/2021 7:44:00 AM
Reading this sweet verse is a wonderful way to start my day! Exceptional writing, Victor. :)
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Date: 9/9/2021 6:36:00 AM
I hear and see the baby through your gifted words, Victor. You created baby's movements perfectly. Excellent write!
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Date: 9/9/2021 4:42:00 AM
There is nothing better than having a new baby around, and as older men, we always wish in such situations that our ticking clock would go back a few years, but that is impossible. Victor, I wish you a very happy birthday and many more years of good health and happiness.
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Date: 9/9/2021 2:37:00 AM
Wow Victor this poem truly stole my heart with your fabulous words ~ "when a baby first sings" a delightful phrase, as are so many more. A FAVE for me my friend ~ thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 9/9/2021 2:22:00 AM
Nothing more beautiful Victor than the birth of a child, a gift from God. Tom
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