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Cedar Hills

The contour of shade,
Casts a sweet smell of cedar;
Scent of Spring’s return.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mayall Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 11:08 AM
liked the haiku
Edmonds Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 10:03 AM
Wow, vivid haiku, cedar hills, unique, but doesn't surprise me.
Neal Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 3:09 AM
I live by ceder hills and this captures it so well. DN
Reynolds Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 5:29 AM
I love cedar-beautiful image, Raul. love, Kristin
Moreno Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 2:19 AM
Contours of beauty.............Danielle
Goombi Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 1:29 AM
A certain Spring smell. -Boo
Strand Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 1:12 AM
Nice aroma of Spring Raul.Rgds Brian
Martin Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 8:09 PM
Nice illustration of Spring. Marvelous work. Tyler
Neal Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 7:14 PM
Sweet smell it is, lovely image. Love E.
Ehigiator Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 7:04 PM
Beautiful haiku, as lovely as ever..Love the refreshing images this leaves in my mind...Awesome! GB, Tyesha
Ginn Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 6:46 PM
Its so neat to remember the many things Ive missed like hose water and fresh cut grass thanks for helping me remember Raul.
Gorelick Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 4:35 PM
You have written some woderful Haikus lately, but this one in the best so far..(my opinion)BG
Esquire Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 3:33 PM
Dear Raul,Wow! YOU are definitely the Sensei of Haiku I bow to YOUR Greatness ALWAYS... HG -- Raul I would like YOUR opinion My Heart wants to enter "Broken Heart" in the POETRY SOUP June Contest I already have "If I Could" Entered Thank-YOU ALWAYS...HG
Payne Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 2:20 PM
mmm yes I can smell it... awesome haiku loved it! Blessings, ~Michaela~
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March 24, 2009 at 1:10 PM
Nice use of imagery and alliteration for a refreshing spring view. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comment. Have a nice day! Karen
Atanacio Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 1:04 PM
aaww yes and I wait...
Shango Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 12:13 PM
Man, this haiku is loaded with tropic magic. Way to go, Raul. love, my brother, and peace
Higgins Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 11:55 AM
Raul you are writing some wonderful haiku..this is another that is well written..the second line..very cool.
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