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Cedar Hills

The contour of shade, Casts a sweet smell of cedar; Scent of Spring’s return.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/7/2009 11:08:00 AM
liked the haiku
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Date: 3/29/2009 10:03:00 AM
Wow, vivid haiku, cedar hills, unique, but doesn't surprise me.
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Date: 3/27/2009 3:09:00 AM
I live by ceder hills and this captures it so well. DN
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Date: 3/25/2009 5:29:00 AM
I love cedar-beautiful image, Raul. love, Kristin
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Date: 3/25/2009 2:19:00 AM
Contours of beauty.............Danielle
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Date: 3/25/2009 1:29:00 AM
A certain Spring smell. -Boo
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Date: 3/25/2009 1:12:00 AM
Nice aroma of Spring Raul.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/24/2009 8:09:00 PM
Nice illustration of Spring. Marvelous work. Tyler
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Date: 3/24/2009 7:14:00 PM
Sweet smell it is, lovely image. Love E.
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Date: 3/24/2009 7:04:00 PM
Beautiful haiku, as lovely as ever..Love the refreshing images this leaves in my mind...Awesome! GB, Tyesha
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Date: 3/24/2009 6:46:00 PM
Its so neat to remember the many things Ive missed like hose water and fresh cut grass thanks for helping me remember Raul.
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Date: 3/24/2009 4:35:00 PM
You have written some woderful Haikus lately, but this one in the best so far..(my opinion)BG
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Date: 3/24/2009 3:33:00 PM
Dear Raul,Wow! YOU are definitely the Sensei of Haiku I bow to YOUR Greatness ALWAYS... HG -- Raul I would like YOUR opinion My Heart wants to enter "Broken Heart" in the POETRY SOUP June Contest I already have "If I Could" Entered Thank-YOU ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/24/2009 2:20:00 PM
mmm yes I can smell it... awesome haiku loved it! Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 3/24/2009 1:10:00 PM
Nice use of imagery and alliteration for a refreshing spring view. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comment. Have a nice day! Karen
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Date: 3/24/2009 1:04:00 PM
aaww yes and I wait...
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Date: 3/24/2009 12:13:00 PM
Man, this haiku is loaded with tropic magic. Way to go, Raul. love, my brother, and peace
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Date: 3/24/2009 11:55:00 AM
Raul you are writing some wonderful haiku..this is another that is well written..the second line..very cool.
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