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Contest: LIGHT UP THE LANTERNE

Sposor:  Nette Onclaud

Date:     18-06-2025

ceasefire

                                                  war

                                               a storm

                                            wipes out all

                                          altruism blooms

                                                peace



Place: 5th
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Andresen Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 10:51 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful Lantern, Patri :) - hugs
Venkata Ramana Avatar
June 22, 2025 at 3:13 AM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
Dietrich Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 9:20 AM
Wonderful. Congrats
Venkata Ramana Avatar
June 22, 2025 at 3:13 AM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
Agustin Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 6:03 AM
Congrats. Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
Venkata Ramana Avatar
June 22, 2025 at 3:12 AM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 5:49 AM
A storm wipes out all! Altruism blooms… Congrats!
Venkata Ramana Avatar
June 22, 2025 at 3:11 AM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
Greenhough Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 8:27 PM
Peace would be welcome. This is a wise lanterne.
Venkata Ramana Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 10:53 PM
Thank you so much for your best compliments.
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