Augustus Black Poet Narrative

Cb Tribute Contest One - Broken Wings

Unidentified disease weaken the holy land;
The people's hearts was about to cease.
The cure was on the mountains, where the dragons ruled.
Although her wings were broken, but still she came; 
Defeated the dragons and bought peace to the people. 
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Date - 9th October 2016

Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

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Constance La France October 23, 2016 at 4:13 PM Augustus, congratulations on your win in the contest and your tribute poem to me touched my heart, thank you ~

Jan Allison October 23, 2016 at 3:46 PM What a lovely tribute to BW:-) many congrats on your win Augustus:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen October 23, 2016 at 12:48 PM - Lovely tribute, Augustus :) - Congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anu Nayak October 23, 2016 at 1:41 AM Dear Augustus, lovely tribute to B.W:) So nice! So creative! loved it!congratulations on your sweet win!// love, Anu:) Augustus Black October 23, 2016 at 2:14 AM Thanks Anu.

Beautiful Scars October 23, 2016 at 12:57 AM Awwww Augustus, very sweet and so true. She does bring peace to us...congrats!:)-luloo Augustus Black October 23, 2016 at 2:13 AM Thank you. Huggs.

Eve Roper October 22, 2016 at 9:19 PM This is so nice ,good write, great tribute, Augustus , and congratulations on your win :) Hugs Eve Augustus Black October 23, 2016 at 2:13 AM Thank you huggs.

Alexis Y. October 22, 2016 at 8:49 PM Hi Augustus, This is such a fitting tribute to BW. I found to be so poetic as well. Congratulations on your 1st place win: -) Alexis Augustus Black October 23, 2016 at 2:15 AM Thanks pal. Augustus Black October 23, 2016 at 2:14 AM Thanks pal.

Andrea Dietrich October 22, 2016 at 8:09 PM Nice metaphor for our dragon slayer, Broken Wings!! Thanks for supporting my contest and congrats to you, Augustus. Augustus Black October 23, 2016 at 2:12 AM Thank you so much, Mam.