Cavity-Filled

The more I stare 
   at Mona Lisa"s 
      fabled smile,

the more I see 
   nothing there that's 
      faintly mystical;

none in those lips 
   is remotely 
      enigmatic,

none in their slight 
   slant is celestially 
      aesthetic.

In fact, 
   there are other ways 
      of looking at it:

a smile of one 
   trying to explain 
      some mild mischief,

suppressing 
   an embarassing 
      big burp, maybe,

or one deftly 
   hiding her 
      cavity-filled teeth !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Foy Avatar
July 27, 2008 at 8:16 PM
I like very humorful didnt know if that was the purpose but good way of critiqing art from your perception good job, Foy
Naces Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 10:08 PM
Thanks, Trey. Yes, just humoring.
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