Cavity

Dentist delight
Halloween night

Patient's fright
Toothache plight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
October 22, 2011 at 11:19 PM
I've just been to one and his plan is to make me poor! It sure is his delight.
A   Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 6:52 PM
Doris, yes lucky dentist~ENJOYED YOUR POEM,,have yourself a wonderful Sunday~ ;-) take care,..p.d.
Horne Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 8:13 AM
LOL, yes, dentists and Halloween seem to go hand in hand, don't they? Love this witty piece, Doris
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 2:13 AM
GOOD ones, Doris. And to answer your question about the C pump, I just googled things that suck and it came up on the list. There was a little addie for one. I probably wouldn't know what to do with one. hahaha. Luv, Andrea
Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 6:21 PM
Yes, all that candy could be money in the dentist's pocket..Send his children to college..Enjoyed reading the creativity..Thanks for stopping by ....Mom
Johnson Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 6:53 PM
be orright, maybe tonight, great verse babe, don't need improving.....
Sivey Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 6:13 PM
I love short poems as they test the poet to create a masterful poem while using the least amount of words as possible! And I believe you have successfully created one of those very poems! Very awesome work! Kudos to you!!
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