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Dentist delight Halloween night Patient's fright Toothache plight

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/22/2011 11:19:00 PM

I've just been to one and his plan is to make me poor! It sure is his delight.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/9/2011 6:52:00 PM

Doris, yes lucky dentist~ENJOYED YOUR POEM,,have yourself a wonderful Sunday~ ;-) take care,..p.d.

Jack Horne

Date: 10/9/2011 8:13:00 AM

LOL, yes, dentists and Halloween seem to go hand in hand, don't they? Love this witty piece, Doris

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2011 2:13:00 AM

GOOD ones, Doris. And to answer your question about the C pump, I just googled things that suck and it came up on the list. There was a little addie for one. I probably wouldn't know what to do with one. hahaha. Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2011 6:21:00 PM

Yes, all that candy could be money in the dentist's pocket..Send his children to college..Enjoyed reading the creativity..Thanks for stopping by ....Mom

Don Johnson

Date: 10/7/2011 6:53:00 PM

be orright, maybe tonight, great verse babe, don't need improving.....

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/7/2011 6:13:00 PM

I love short poems as they test the poet to create a masterful poem while using the least amount of words as possible! And I believe you have successfully created one of those very poems! Very awesome work! Kudos to you!!