Cave Days

Twilight brings human anxiety as the night brings the baying sound.

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Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 10/25/2009 2:07:00 PM

It sure does bring us anxiety. Love it!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/8/2009 12:57:00 AM

This is such a mysterious write...thanks for sharing this :)

Shirin Neshat

Date: 8/7/2009 7:33:00 PM

I like it.

Abe Lopez

Date: 8/3/2009 9:56:00 PM

very nice, I love this work!

Date: 8/2/2009 2:40:00 PM

Interesting perspective captured in just three lines. I've already read it a few times. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/31/2009 1:14:00 PM

Nice Senryu. Keep writing. Sara

James Fraser

Date: 7/31/2009 9:01:00 AM

Super Senryu Sue>>James

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/31/2009 8:21:00 AM

very nice FULL imagery with a sparce use of words. I would love your perspective on War..in my contest please let me hear from you! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/31/2009 7:30:00 AM

Wow Sue excellent Senryu. I think it could possibly be a Haiku also. I guess these form are all in the way we read then. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol