Cave Days

Twilight brings human
anxiety as the night
brings the baying sound.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
October 25, 2009 at 2:07 PM
It sure does bring us anxiety. Love it!
K. Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 12:57 AM
This is such a mysterious write...thanks for sharing this :)
Neshat Avatar
August 7, 2009 at 7:33 PM
I like it.
Lopez Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 9:56 PM
very nice, I love this work!
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August 2, 2009 at 2:40 PM
Interesting perspective captured in just three lines. I've already read it a few times. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
Kendrick Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 1:14 PM
Nice Senryu. Keep writing. Sara
Fraser Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 9:01 AM
Super Senryu Sue>>James
Guzzi Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 8:21 AM
very nice FULL imagery with a sparce use of words. I would love your perspective on War..in my contest please let me hear from you! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 7:30 AM
Wow Sue excellent Senryu. I think it could possibly be a Haiku also. I guess these form are all in the way we read then. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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