Wendy Rycroft Poet Free verse

Cave

Deep down hidden!
Silence!! 
As loneliness formed beauty,
Centuries of creativity,
Ebbing and flowing,
Sometimes so soft and gentle,
Others violently thrashing waters,
Against the rocks of time,
As the sea etches away in secret,
Forming and designing,
Diamond cuttings! 
Art forming patterns,
Nature hid her extravagance,
Unseen by human eyes,
For thousands of years 
Until her unveiling day,
When daylight enters,
Sun revealing colors,
Sculptured with magnificent shapes,
That make people bow their heads in honor,
As standing on holy ground.
When entering this cave!

02/08/2016

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Alexis Y. August 9, 2016 at 5:11 AM Hi Wendy, Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis Wendy Rycroft August 9, 2016 at 6:31 AM Thank you, Alexis xxx

Joseph May August 8, 2016 at 8:54 AM Congrats on your win Wendy Wendy Rycroft August 8, 2016 at 1:59 PM thank you Joseph

Sandra Haight August 7, 2016 at 10:23 AM A lovely take on the theme, Wendy. Congratulations on your nice placement in the 'caves' Premiere Contest! Hugs, Sandra Wendy Rycroft August 7, 2016 at 1:04 PM Thank you, Sandra yours was a great poem xxx

Joseph May August 6, 2016 at 10:07 AM Love the third line Wendy...great write... Wendy Rycroft August 6, 2016 at 10:28 AM Thank you Joseph

Alexis Y. August 3, 2016 at 4:11 PM Hi Wendy, This a good entry for the contest. Good luck in the contest:-) Alexis Wendy Rycroft August 4, 2016 at 2:33 AM Thank you Alexis x

Ronny Madonsela August 2, 2016 at 10:41 AM Great write, I really love the Imagery . All the best for the contest . smiles *Ron* Wendy Rycroft August 2, 2016 at 11:52 AM Thank you Ronny xxxxx

Daniel Turner August 2, 2016 at 6:24 AM That's exactly how it works Wendy. Add a little wind from a hole somewhere and then you get the magnificent caves. Excellent write! Wendy Rycroft August 2, 2016 at 11:53 AM Thank you, Daniel xxxxxx

Jan Allison August 2, 2016 at 6:10 AM Unique take on the theme Wendy good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Wendy Rycroft August 2, 2016 at 11:54 AM Thank you Jan xxxxxxxxxxxxx

Ronald Kent August 2, 2016 at 5:45 AM Nice one, good luck in the contest. Wendy Rycroft August 2, 2016 at 5:51 AM Thank you Ronald xxxx