Cautious

CAUTIOUS taking light into the darkness of every heart that touches me there are no illegitimate moments we ride a merry-go-round waving to somebody who is not mirrored in times golden happiest moments cautiously we make the biggest decisions of our lives © Kim van Breda
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Negron Flores Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 6:05 PM
Excellent poem Kim.
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September 30, 2015 at 3:25 PM
Hi Kim, this is deep. I love the line about the light.... LINDA
Van Breda Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 4:11 PM
Thanks again Linda. Your comments are encouraging ~~X~~
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