'cause I'M Wonderless

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Cassia Tree

Driven by courage and inherent strength;
Dream of worlds vanish, transcending forward.
Wonder-less towards the horizon length,
Vagrant clouds sail with the wind's breath northward.

Dream of worlds vanish, transcending forward
Desert path, mountain valleys enraptured.
Vagrant clouds sail with the wind's breath northward
Between O-Cassia trees and recaptured.

Desert path, mountain valleys enraptured,
Fumbling golden flowers on the branches,
Between O-Cassia trees, and recaptured
Outstretched towards sway of shining patches.

Fumbling golden flowers on the branches
Wonder-less towards the horizon length,
Outstretched towards sway of shining patches
Driven by courage and inherent strength.


11/23/2020

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Date: 1/1/2021 12:50:00 AM
Beautiful poem Eve! Congrats on you honorable mention!
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Date: 12/28/2020 7:51:00 AM
Hi Eve, I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Nice descriptions filled with good imagery. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/27/2020 2:23:00 PM
Very descriptive winning work. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 12/27/2020 1:51:00 PM
Hi Eve, Thanks for taking part in this contest. Your attention to meter and rhyme made it a smooth read and a deserving winner. Dave
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Date: 12/27/2020 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write and picture. I love your line, "Driven by courage and inherent strength." We could all use that. Enjoy your win today with joy/blessings.................
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Date: 11/24/2020 2:21:00 PM
you make this form look so easy, i always admire your pantoums and this one is no different, filled with such vivid imagery with great flow... bravo Eve... best wishes in the contest! hugs
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Date: 11/24/2020 2:28:00 AM
Breathtaking dear Ev...You seem to be so well-versed with this form...I wish I could do the same..Keep the ink flowing.
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Date: 11/23/2020 7:20:00 AM
You are an expert in the pantoum, the rhymes very good and it flows so well...
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Date: 11/23/2020 3:37:00 AM
Well written pantoum, Eve:)
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Date: 11/22/2020 11:02:00 PM
Wow! Need we say more?
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Date: 11/22/2020 11:00:00 PM
Lovely pantoum and so well composed. Best for a win ~~
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