Brian Davey Poet Rhyme

Cause For Concern

 My life hurts...
     Cause for concern
 Pain is management
     Suffering's just learned

 My days die...
     Darkness to sunrise
 Shawdows demand it
     In the light of lies

 My future is false...
     The Evil reciprocates
 Then laughter begins
     As sin manipulates

 I just want to leave
     But no one can leave
          Please just let me go

                          NO!

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