Causality

What is this void you try to fill,
A void empty yet stuffed with society's swill,
Stark emotions driven by dopamine,
Scrounging for joy on a subconscious mezzanine,
Started all by a demented serpent's lie,
If you eat it's fruit, you will not die,
Followed by a sin that affected all humanity,
Which even caused this void of insanity.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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March 5, 2025 at 9:21 AM
Your poem Causality has a strong, thought-provoking rhythm and a deep philosophical weight. The imagery of an "empty yet stuffed" void is striking, capturing the paradox of modern existence--people seeking fulfillment in artificial means, yet remaining unsatisfied. The reference to dopamine and subconscious levels adds a psychological layer, while the biblical allusion to the serpent's lie ties it all back to the idea of original sin and human downfall.
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March 5, 2025 at 3:13 PM
Your analysis is so striking again! You knew again exactly what I was aiming for! Thank you for your attention to this poem. Again I really appreciate it coming from such a great poet as yourself!
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