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Caught Up In the Moment

lolling on a hill
in glossy days of summer
cherishing blue skies

fat bumblebees hum
tunes of sweetness and sunlight
purple rose delight

gurgling brook's laughing
then the fall, and mum's the word
chrysanthemum craze

calico cat frisks
in the mystery of hours
colored by beauty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 11:46 AM
Creative lines in these Haiku. I enjoyed reading them. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Buehler Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 4:00 PM
I appreciate your kind words, Sara. Evelyn
One Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 10:47 AM
This is a lovely summery poem.. Nice imagery
Buehler Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 10:59 AM
Many thanks, Silent One.
DiMino Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 8:45 AM
Divine poetry. Masterful! You got it down perfectly now. Slow down, or you will end up in the history books, as being one of our greatest writers of the day. Blessings! A fav!
Buehler Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 10:59 AM
Thank you so much for your joy inspiring comments and your fav, Joe. Thanks also for the wonderful compliment. Happy holidays!
Daniel Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 6:45 AM
Beautiful haikus, Evelyn:) I find writing one difficult, you have outdone yourself here:)
Buehler Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 10:55 AM
Thank you for the lovely compliment, Jo. I find that some forms are more easily mastered than others, which come more naturally to us. But, practice causes improvement. :)
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