Caught Up In the Moment

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lolling on a hill
in glossy days of summer
cherishing blue skies

fat bumblebees hum
tunes of sweetness and sunlight
purple rose delight

gurgling brook's laughing
then the fall, and mum's the word
chrysanthemum craze

calico cat frisks
in the mystery of hours
colored by beauty

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/4/2022 11:46:00 AM

Creative lines in these Haiku. I enjoyed reading them. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/4/2022 4:00:00 PM

I appreciate your kind words, Sara. Evelyn

Silent One

Date: 12/4/2022 10:47:00 AM

This is a lovely summery poem.. Nice imagery

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/4/2022 10:59:00 AM

Many thanks, Silent One.

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/4/2022 8:45:00 AM

Divine poetry. Masterful! You got it down perfectly now. Slow down, or you will end up in the history books, as being one of our greatest writers of the day. Blessings! A fav!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/4/2022 10:59:00 AM

Thank you so much for your joy inspiring comments and your fav, Joe. Thanks also for the wonderful compliment. Happy holidays!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/4/2022 6:45:00 AM

Beautiful haikus, Evelyn:) I find writing one difficult, you have outdone yourself here:)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/4/2022 10:55:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely compliment, Jo. I find that some forms are more easily mastered than others, which come more naturally to us. But, practice causes improvement. :)