Caught Up In Loveless Thoughts

The younger I was, the quicker and kinder 
I responded to love, and believing in sharing,
I spread that kindness to anyone fonder
of my perception that all were deserving.
I gave all and kept nothing to shelter me from fear;
everybody thought I didn't need up-lifting words,
and being left without the courage to ask, I sank deeper
into loneliness being caught up in loveless thoughts.
I yearned for their friendship, but none came...
and by putting on an alluding smile, it didn't help indeed,
because they assumed I wasn't in need;
if only they had known me better, I wouldn't bear this blame!

Even now, being lonely and caught up in loveless thoughts,
desire for happiness doesn't seem stronger than it was!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Onclaud Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 1:37 PM
a knock-out, andrew..miles of congrats on a well deserved award! :)huggs!
Freeman Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 9:18 AM
Andrew, Beautiful, Good to see you near the top spot. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses
Neels Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 7:12 AM
A thought provoking write Andrew, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest :)
Brown Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 6:25 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Andrew. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 6:20 AM
Congrats Andrew on your third place win .. luv this from title to last line.. very emotional expressions impress deeply...luv..
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