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I know that you’re cheating with deception. It's perfectly clear the only one you deceive is just you Ninette Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet 05/25/20

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Date: 9/7/2020 1:12:00 PM
spot on, even when proved they still deny it all or try to validate it. Emilia.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/8/2020 3:50:00 AM
I wish my sibling would read this!!:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 7/19/2020 10:18:00 AM
oh, very clever, deep one here
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Date: 9/8/2020 3:50:00 AM
thanks Jack:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/10/2020 9:30:00 AM
Congrats Jan, on what seems effortless and natural in composition, with poignancy, but I'm sure otherwise in terms of effort. Bob
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Date: 6/10/2020 10:19:00 AM
thanks Bob:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/10/2020 5:05:00 AM
After numerous attempts I think that this time I should be able to write and send a comment, Jan!! A meaningful Ninette which will probably keep echoing across the Soup corridors! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs // paul
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Date: 6/10/2020 6:10:00 AM
... perhaps it will resonate with a few Paul:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 6/8/2020 7:53:00 PM
Jan, so true. Ultimately, cheater is a cheat on oneself. Congrats for this fine Ninette win. Mohan
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Date: 6/9/2020 3:11:00 AM
so true Mohan:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/8/2020 2:54:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on this timely and timeless wisdom, Jan. Hugs ~ John
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/9/2020 3:11:00 AM
Thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/8/2020 2:35:00 PM
Wow! These are such honest words with depth. Congratulations on your win Jan. Hugs :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/9/2020 3:10:00 AM
Thanks Aditi:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/8/2020 11:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love both your poem and your sign on top. Enjoy your win and day..............
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/9/2020 3:10:00 AM
the quote and poem are sadly based on a family member who cannot separate fact from fiction:-(hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/8/2020 10:39:00 AM
CONGRATS on your win, Jan! Janice
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/9/2020 3:08:00 AM
Thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/8/2020 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations Jan, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, well done my friend, Emile.
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/9/2020 3:08:00 AM
Thanks Emile, I think my poem will resonate with some here too:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/28/2020 7:21:00 AM
Exactly write!
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/9/2020 3:07:00 AM
Thanks Caren:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/26/2020 9:26:00 AM
Good to put on walls...It might help a few...Well done
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Date: 6/9/2020 3:07:00 AM
Thanks Arturo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/26/2020 12:41:00 AM
Very true ..in deceiving we deceive not others but ourselves.
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/26/2020 2:01:00 AM
you said it perfectly:-) :-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/25/2020 8:50:00 PM
Ain't it the truth, Jan?! ~ Gershon
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/26/2020 2:00:00 AM
yeah and it's hard to remain silent on the subject:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/25/2020 7:26:00 PM
Well said, Jan... a pervasive problem. How do you ever trust someone who is a habitual liar?
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Date: 5/26/2020 2:00:00 AM
Once trust is broken it is hard to take anything they say seriously, the quote is perfect for someone in my family - love the avatar!!:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/25/2020 4:04:00 PM
A powerful poem Jan, a much needed message! hugs
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Date: 5/25/2020 4:41:00 PM
Thanks Tania I was inspired by recent events:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 5/25/2020 3:31:00 PM
Self-deception is an addiction that doesn't fool those who see through the sham. What's it take to bring such a person to face reality? The truth. Well wishes in the contest, Jan.
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/25/2020 3:55:00 PM
Thanks Lin, you are so correct :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/25/2020 3:12:00 PM
well said, jan! sounds like a winner for the contest - good luck!
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/25/2020 3:22:00 PM
Have a look at the British press today Ilene some folk think they can pull the wool over our eyes!:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 5/25/2020 2:23:00 PM
Well written Jan, that idiot came to mind before I saw your comment to Rico, it's an utter shambles and has been since the start. Oh, his second trip was to test his eyes, you couldnt make it up. Good luck Tom
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/25/2020 3:21:00 PM
I couldn't believe the gall of the man =- he needs his head examining as well as his eyes oh and the visit just happened to coincide with his wife's birthday - it beggars belief... makes me so glad i am not in the UK!!!
Date: 5/25/2020 2:18:00 PM
Oh yes, Jan nothing good about one deceiving him/herself. I know this is for a contest, but imagine how real this is. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Luv Linda
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/25/2020 3:20:00 PM
Linda so glad you are back you have been so missed, hope you are posting another one of your gems - I was inspired to write this after listening to one of the British politicians who has been found to be seemingly breaking lock down rule. am SO happy to see you:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/25/2020 1:20:00 PM
Please forward a copy to the Covidiot! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 5/25/2020 1:30:00 PM
I wrote this after the shambles with Dominic Cummins - just heard the press conference. I can't abide being deceived and lied to which I have big time with a certain member of my family but also here on the site:-( hugs Jan xx

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