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Caught In the Sun

Where dawn is born and clouds are spun
To clothe the sky in golden lace,
The sea ignites as currents chase
Soft morning light that's just begun  
To wake our love, caught in the sun.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2013 1:55:00 PM

Revisiting this one that you did so well with!! It almost sounds like it was in a contest I sponsored but I am thinking it was another Souper that did this particular topic. (what a bad memory I have!)

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/20/2013 9:20:00 AM

This is lovely Ober... Well done and Keep the flag flying~A.O

Painted Hunter

Date: 3/5/2013 1:43:00 PM

I can see why this was 1st....mmmmm, those are some good lines.

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 1/29/2013 10:17:00 AM

Awesome word pictures! In reply, I am homeschooled, so I really don't have majors, but I have studied literature and history since I was about 8. I doubt if I will ever stop. I like studying the different styles and subjects of writing, and the many customs and quirks of past civilizations. I like the Greeks too; I am amazed at how much they contributed to our modern way of life and government, while many think of them as a primitive culture. Maybe they watched less T.V. and used their minds. ;)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/9/2013 10:31:00 AM

just been reading a few more of your poems and I must say I'm very impressed, what a talent you have!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/9/2013 10:15:00 AM

congrats on a worthy 1st place, nice rhythm and flow, love those clouds clothing the sky in golden lace, beautiful! :)

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 1/9/2013 5:20:00 AM

Beautiful image, and big congratulations for your first place win....Mehnaz

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/9/2013 1:52:00 AM

Belated congratulations on your top winning spot Heather love xx

James Nichols

Date: 1/8/2013 9:31:00 PM

congrats on a well-deserved win. beautiful!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/8/2013 6:13:00 PM

Congrad's to a rising star of Poetry Soup. Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2013 6:14:00 PM

Hello there big first place winner. I just LOVED your poem. Like me, you are a sun lover I am sure! Guess what, yours is only one of two that were on the theme Caught in the Sun. Super!! Congratulations.