Donna Jones Poet Rhyme

Caught In the Middle

I see blue sky above me and blue sky below
Green leaves above me below again I know it is so
White clouds floating above me are floating under me I know
I feel warm sunshine above me, under me its reflection does glow

All here along as I float all alone in my row boat
While the sky and the water try to outshine each other
The image I see above me, I see again below me exactly
I'm caught in the middle of some kind of unsolved riddle

Then the sky starts to rain, below me again it's the same
Wet above and below, what a wonderful show!

©Donna Jones

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire March 23, 2013 at 8:20 PM Dear Donna, YOU and I have much in common in Life's adventures My rowboat was at Lake Tahoe.I do remember the rain being warm but the Lake being Ice cold. YOU always bring fond memories back with YOUR Glorious Writes. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Silent Secret...Harry Donna Jones March 23, 2013 at 9:54 PM Seems like magic doesn't it...this way....peaceful......always Harry....Donna

Bethany St John January 30, 2013 at 1:40 PM what a lovely write. Great word picture! Thanks for your comments :) hugs my friend. Donna Jones January 30, 2013 at 5:57 PM Thanks for the kind words and I hope everyone gets to enjoy as many wonderful days outside in God's nature as I have. Thanks again

Jim Pemberton January 29, 2013 at 7:42 AM Thank you for your thoughtful comments! God bless you!!! JP Donna Jones January 29, 2013 at 1:28 PM Most welcome, look forward to many more.

Eileen Manassian January 28, 2013 at 9:30 PM Lovely poem, Donna! It's hard to get caught in the middle, isn't it! Thanks for the post. Have a great day! Donna Jones January 29, 2013 at 1:30 PM When its something difficult, but this wonderful day in the row boat it was nice enjoying the reflections. I look forward to reading more of your loving poetry. More of it needed in my life...you'll see when I start writing my deep stuff....

Jeffry Cohan January 28, 2013 at 12:38 PM i want to thank you for the compliment wherein you wrote it's nice to know there are people like you in the world right back atcha girl.your poem is beautiful at its essence and read it three times it truly becomes the day you describe if only the last line were true because what you wrote about me based on one poem i want to say don't be so quick to judge. if you have the time or inclnation to do so read some of my other works.then judge me! thanks for your compliment and your poem ~free cee!~ Donna Jones March 1, 2013 at 9:21 PM It is nice to know there are people like you in the world. I know I could trust you with myself and my heart anytime without question and you would protect it, because I do not judge our friendship on conditions nor do you...

Jack Ellison January 27, 2013 at 1:02 PM Very creative my dear Donna! I really enjoy your poetry. Hope you're enjoying it here... big hugs!!! Donna Jones January 27, 2013 at 9:47 PM I am dearest Jack and all of you guys and gals out there that make us feel so welcome. Knowing someone anyone might get the picture you are trying to pass on is a great compliment even if I don't know all the correct terms. Thanks again!