Caught in The Dance

It would be good
to be a thought set free
of what holds it here 
in time and space, 
to go wherever a whim
might take it, 
some far galaxy
or a small pond in a garden
bathed in moonlight.
It would be good
to be caught in the gravity
of the Sublime and begin
that slow spiral dance inwards
towards the centre 
of all things.
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January 2, 2025 at 5:27 PM
Awww Paul …..completely captivated by this poem….i was that thought set free just gently drifting! Debx
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