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Cattails

I enter the solstice
to hear snow falling
where winter leads the way

Along a childhood memory
snow labored painfully
sweeping the landscape
with heavy shoulders
of white surrender

It seemed a great distance
from Grandmother’s house 
to the barn
where the icy sky 
bellowed a deep freeze
over shivering fields
of forgotten cattails


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from my sixth book-length manuscript

©dah / dahlusion 2013, 2016 a.r.r.

“Cattails” was first published in
‘Jelllyfish Whispers’ a literary magazine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/30/2017 6:54:00 AM
Awesome and splendid and the snowy wording exotic , poetic and fab for me. I enjoyed it lots. Kudos. Nice to read from your pen again , I hope u will too my latest. And hapy new yr.
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Date: 3/2/2017 3:56:00 PM
Thank you! ––))

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