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Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson

Cats Laying

Cats laying in their windows.
                                     Cool breeze from the outside gently blows
                                     through over their furry bellies.

Copyright © Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson | Year Posted 2010

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July 8, 2010 at 9:21 PM

Cool haiku.

July 6, 2010 at 6:49 AM

What a peaceful picture, Rhonda! Can see the fur meandering with the outside breeze!! Thank you for your kind comment and congrats...Have a nice week...Gert

July 5, 2010 at 5:19 PM

I can see them now.

July 5, 2010 at 2:38 PM

Very nicely done! I love cats, and dogs, and horses, and every one of God's furry critters...lol

July 4, 2010 at 9:54 AM

Loved this piece here.. I'm new so have mercy and I hope you have an open mind my styles pretty different. Enjoy ya day

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July 4, 2010 at 1:51 AM

nice one on the relaxation of the cats i would like to enjoy hehe,, enjoyed..P.D.

July 3, 2010 at 7:04 PM

A nice expressive write with good images. Will you please check the syllable counts?. Rhoda

July 3, 2010 at 4:54 PM

Sounds like those cats are special and winners on great honor in your home..Sara

July 3, 2010 at 4:47 PM

You have me smiling with this one. Send some of that cool breeze our way! Keep on writing. Karen

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