Cats Laying

Cats laying in their windows. Cool breeze from the outside gently blows through over their furry bellies.

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Marie Harrison

Date: 7/8/2010 9:21:00 PM

Cool haiku.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/6/2010 6:49:00 AM

What a peaceful picture, Rhonda! Can see the fur meandering with the outside breeze!! Thank you for your kind comment and congrats...Have a nice week...Gert

Marie Harrison

Date: 7/5/2010 5:19:00 PM

I can see them now.

Sena Slaughter

Date: 7/5/2010 2:38:00 PM

Very nicely done! I love cats, and dogs, and horses, and every one of God's furry critters...lol

Diiamond Rich

Date: 7/4/2010 9:54:00 AM

Loved this piece here.. I'm new so have mercy and I hope you have an open mind my styles pretty different. Enjoy ya day

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/4/2010 1:51:00 AM

nice one on the relaxation of the cats i would like to enjoy hehe,, enjoyed..P.D.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/3/2010 7:04:00 PM

A nice expressive write with good images. Will you please check the syllable counts?. Rhoda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/3/2010 4:54:00 PM

Sounds like those cats are special and winners on great honor in your home..Sara

Date: 7/3/2010 4:47:00 PM

You have me smiling with this one. Send some of that cool breeze our way! Keep on writing. Karen