Get Your Premium Membership

Cat's Eyes

the cat sits angry at the window a sparrow’s dream John G. Lawless ©12/8/2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/12/2021 4:58:00 AM
Nice haiku. My cat forebe watches bird PANGS. Xoxo
Login to Reply
Date: 12/8/2021 4:17:00 PM
So, sparrows have nightmares too. Do they awaken in a cold sweat?! ~ Big Bird
Login to Reply
lawless Avatar
John lawless
Date: 12/9/2021 5:35:00 AM
I believe the do have nightmares....about THIS cat.
Date: 12/8/2021 11:30:00 AM
Hello Lawless John, I love this cat Haiku. Also my fav. Enjoy your day my friend.
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/9/2021 11:00:00 AM
Hello Lawless John, I am not sure but i do think cats like the birds to chase, So I believe you are right. Enjoy your day my friend.
lawless Avatar
John lawless
Date: 12/9/2021 5:34:00 AM
Thanks for stopping to visit the cat. I find myself trying to figure out "what is that cat thinking"...and I believe sparrows are always on his mind".
Date: 12/8/2021 9:53:00 AM
Clever haiku can go a couple different ways! A dreaming bird or sarcasm. And that emotion. I can picture it! I expect more to happen… woot woot! Fave!
Login to Reply
lawless Avatar
John lawless
Date: 12/9/2021 5:30:00 AM
Kim, our neighbors cat stops by for "kitty brunch" every day. When he can't go out he sits at a window staring at the birds.