Cat's Eyes

the cat sits angry at the window a sparrow’s dream John G. Lawless ©12/8/2021

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/12/2021 4:58:00 AM

Nice haiku. My cat forebe watches bird PANGS. Xoxo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/8/2021 4:17:00 PM

So, sparrows have nightmares too. Do they awaken in a cold sweat?! ~ Big Bird

John Lawless
Date: 12/9/2021 5:35:00 AM

I believe the do have nightmares....about THIS cat.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/8/2021 11:30:00 AM

Hello Lawless John, I love this cat Haiku. Also my fav. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/9/2021 11:00:00 AM

Hello Lawless John, I am not sure but i do think cats like the birds to chase, So I believe you are right. Enjoy your day my friend.

John Lawless
Date: 12/9/2021 5:34:00 AM

Thanks for stopping to visit the cat. I find myself trying to figure out "what is that cat thinking"...and I believe sparrows are always on his mind".

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/8/2021 9:53:00 AM

Clever haiku can go a couple different ways! A dreaming bird or sarcasm. And that emotion. I can picture it! I expect more to happen… woot woot! Fave!

John Lawless
Date: 12/9/2021 5:30:00 AM

Kim, our neighbors cat stops by for "kitty brunch" every day. When he can't go out he sits at a window staring at the birds.