Catfish

Cautiously I wade Through shallow waters at dawn Minnows tickle me My fishing hole waits for me catfish jump with the sunrise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 20, 2012 at 3:07 PM
Nicely done with good imagery. Thanks so much for your comments on my ABC poem. Don't think it matters much that the last two letters of the alphabet didn't get used. God Bless, JB
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March 19, 2012 at 11:12 PM
I LOVE this one. So natural and concrete with its images. Is it in the contest I hope?
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March 19, 2012 at 4:23 PM
an expressive Tankka with fantastic imagery flowing.. we did a little fishing down the seashore last year.. so fun.. good luck in contest Rhonda luv..
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March 19, 2012 at 11:50 AM
reminds me of the early morning runs in the boat on the lake... thanks for the memory!
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