Caterpillar Contradiction

they ain't fast. lol

Nice description of caterpillar.Cute haiku-kashinath

Shoud be a contradiction, won't it: So many legs and so little speed! Great interpretation, Andrea and good luck in the contest. Thanks for all your friendliy comments. Have a nice weekend. Love, Gert

Yeah, this was great! You would think with that many legs, he could get from point A to point B in a hurry! Makes one wonder how he can be so slow. Terrific Haiku!

hi andrea :)had to smile when I read this--you sure gave me a different perspective on caterpillars--never saw it that way & the irony of it!! very nice!I hope this wins!!

Yes, indeed, nicely written Haiku, Andrea! Thank you for your friendly comment. El Tatio is a cluster of geysirs in the Chilean Desert. Have a nice time...Gert

Well observed Andrea.Rgds Bian

that is so cool Andrea, now you have me wondering how old you really are, joking, now i wonder why so many legs with no speed at all,. p.d.

Very cute Andrea ! I'll read this to Noah today...he just loves the whole caterpilla thingy ! james

Well I haven't heard how did you do on this one, this one did not inspire me. Smile. And yes I caught your lucky # 5, Cool take on the photo. Unfortunatly my peep on the solar was not appreciated,Lol. Agape, Moses

i love this contradiction,great haiku Andrea-Charma.

Andrea the poem you are thinking of is perhaps "Dulce et Decorum Est.Rgds Brian

Great Haiku, Andrea. Very well written and quite descriptive of the caterpillar. Good luck on the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.

they are cute bugs.the other ones are all disgusting.ha ha.aw, if only their legs were longer like a spiders.imagine if humans had a thousand legs with the same number of feet.that would be quite a disaster.i think about what that would do to the world.lol.oh gosh, here you are, making these weird thoughts come to my head with your haiku.good luck, always. -Always&Forever Lynette

I wonder how many times a day they trip on so many feet or if they ever do it :) Cute Haiku, dear Andrea. Good luck in the contest. Love, Iolanda

Aw, lovely little Haiku Andrea > good luck in the contest. I want to say thank you ever so much for all the kind comments you have graced me with on my poetry >> James

Great write that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing.Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Perfect title, Andrea!!! Loved it!!

cute one--Bream are a type of fish, war mouths, sunfish, are some other common names of bream.

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I thought of it like The Green Mile movie and felt like the caterpillar is a prisoner of his own form until he bursts free... just a thought... its been quite a day... tell u on yahoo...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Very nice Andrea and good luck in the contest ... so much said in a few words to depict the caterpillar's plight..luv.. Linda-Marie