Caterpillar

intuitive pecuilar &
glancing great gestures
peering about- i see
you whispershout
taking teeny tiny pieces 
of me at a time
i'm a puzzle frazzled
can't stick together- you
can't see any better
-born to build
rebuild & bloom
just passing through
pestered perplexed-
taken out of context
is there possibly 
a next best thing?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 18, 2010 at 8:41 AM
What a wonderful day to be reading poetry of others. I am so happy your poetry is among those I am reading this morning Rachel. I wish you as I wish all my fellow poets the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. It is a pleasure to me to read my fellow poets poetry. Love, Carol
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