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Catching Light

I climbed a tall tree today, to catch drop of light. but then it ran away from me, it gave me quite a fright. the whole day I try to find the light that ran away. but my dear I can not find it so ill try another day little drops are every where splattered on the dark gathered around their shining king like small flying sparks help me please, help me, gather up these drops ill make a shining lantern and make this darkness stop.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/11/2013 4:34:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Amber ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/10/2013 9:45:00 PM
ooo.. Ps... ,A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/10/2013 9:44:00 PM
wow, wow.. I love the imagery, and how your first poem caught my attention. like chasing stars looking for the perfect light.... Sad, how easily the light moves away from us. Amber, your last 4 lines are deep. hope the lantern never stops... hugs... linda
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