Catcher of the Moths

Silk beads spun at dusk,
Glistening through the moonlight:
Invisible net.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
August 25, 2009 at 6:55 PM
ya know, me and my girls were just camping, and when we walked to the loo (they always make me walk shotgun on these terrifying jaunts!) in the middle of the night, we always pulled these gossamer tangles out of our face that spanned a good 20 feet at night! and wonder if we ever are carryin' the tigers themselves, hidden! COOL HAIKU! Raul! and true! jimbo
Lopez Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 8:47 PM
Those sneaky spiders..........Great job Raul!!!!!
Fraser Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 5:11 PM
Super Haiku Raul, where have you been hiding, i am missing your canvas big time>>James
Kendrick Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 4:58 PM
Beautifully written and vey descriptive. Sara
Brown Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 5:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your fantastic writing with us today Raul. May the sun shine on you today making your heart joyful. Love, Carol
Higgins Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 4:34 AM
The last line is brilliant Raul..wonderful haiku again.
Chircop Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 3:44 AM
great and different Haiku--charma
Knox Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 5:20 PM
this is a great haiku, kudos to you :)
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