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Catcher of the Moths

Silk beads spun at dusk, Glistening through the moonlight: Invisible net.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/25/2009 6:55:00 PM
ya know, me and my girls were just camping, and when we walked to the loo (they always make me walk shotgun on these terrifying jaunts!) in the middle of the night, we always pulled these gossamer tangles out of our face that spanned a good 20 feet at night! and wonder if we ever are carryin' the tigers themselves, hidden! COOL HAIKU! Raul! and true! jimbo
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Date: 8/24/2009 8:47:00 PM
Those sneaky spiders..........Great job Raul!!!!!
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Date: 8/14/2009 5:11:00 PM
Super Haiku Raul, where have you been hiding, i am missing your canvas big time>>James
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Date: 8/13/2009 4:58:00 PM
Beautifully written and vey descriptive. Sara
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Date: 8/13/2009 5:00:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your fantastic writing with us today Raul. May the sun shine on you today making your heart joyful. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/13/2009 4:34:00 AM
The last line is brilliant Raul..wonderful haiku again.
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Date: 8/13/2009 3:44:00 AM
great and different Haiku--charma
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Date: 8/12/2009 5:20:00 PM
this is a great haiku, kudos to you :)
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