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CATCH YA LATER my bitter cold blues “it’s all in your head,” he says then kicks a beached clam

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 12/11/2013 12:48:00 PM
Well golly, Daver! This makes me feel as balanced as a big footed squatch, and happier than the pompom on a poodle.:( In reality this is a horrible way to feel...don't like this creeping cold much either! Take care, keep well...Love you, Mikki
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Date: 12/11/2013 9:23:00 AM
Daver, amazing poem haiku... xoxo..PD
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Date: 12/8/2013 9:00:00 AM
Dave - I've been thinking about this for days. I just got. slow
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Date: 12/5/2013 6:29:00 PM
still loving this one!!!
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Date: 12/1/2013 3:13:00 AM
Such a picture you show here Daver, as Nette puts it there is a big swing in its field, and i don't just mean that foot; L O L really got a kick outta this one, Joe..)
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Date: 11/27/2013 2:25:00 PM
the chill and the beach.. what a greeat juxtapostion, daver... a superb , descriptive 'ku... how is everything with you.. miss you in my contests..huggs
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Date: 11/27/2013 3:31:00 AM
Hello my dear poetic friend ! Burrrrrr ! As for me, I'd rather have the cold than those hot summers with those high humidity days those of us in Pa. have been having lately, they slow me down for the turtles race, as I love the rabbit's pace ! *smiles* Wonderful write sir ! Have a wonderful Thanksgiving my friend ! Much love, james P.S. I miss being here so very much........
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Date: 11/27/2013 2:14:00 AM
daver, I know you never enter contests. But I really like this one. Please enter it in my contest, will you? It seems tailor made for it. Happy thanksgiving too. I need to get to bed. Taveling first thing in the morning and I should not even be here!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/26/2013 4:25:00 PM
Well, I am impressed by this one..It is very descriptive..I could just see that clam washed ashore disattached from its mooring being kicked back into the ocean..Thanks for the visit to my page..I think that bullfrog up in Alaska was lonely for he was singing the blues...Sara
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Date: 11/25/2013 7:57:00 PM
Lovely expressions with images, daver
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Date: 11/25/2013 3:39:00 PM
interesting one here, Daver : )
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Date: 11/25/2013 12:56:00 PM
- Good one, Daver !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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