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Catch the Clouds

Catch the Clouds As they drift by The moist mist kissed In dream blue high Catch the clouds in The sweet salt snare of A woman’s womb A cozy room Catch the clouds If you care Catch the moist seed Plant it deep Bring the moist need From its Dreamy sleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/24/2020 10:20:00 PM
Another winner of a poem. I especially like the repetition of the word 'moist.' Powerful. A wonderful, thoughtful verse. Regards. Brian
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Date: 10/9/2019 5:21:00 PM
Hello Mel Gill, I am a cloud watcher. i like the shapes of the clouds. Have a nice day my friend.This will be my fav. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 10/4/2019 5:50:00 PM
The expression got my attention and enjoyed
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Date: 10/1/2019 4:41:00 PM
Excellent pace and rhyme!
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Date: 7/9/2019 7:11:00 AM
Interesting use of metaphor.
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Date: 2/15/2019 4:15:00 AM
Wow~ Phil! I can see why your poems will be published! This is truly beautiful! I take photos of clouds whenever I can. Rainbows, too.. All Fascinate me ~no end. So glad you are posting here! Thank you. Panagiota
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Date: 2/1/2019 7:16:00 AM
Very cool Mel, love watching the clouds form into shapes and dreaming...Keep up the good work.
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Date: 2/1/2019 7:24:00 AM
Thanks, Phil. My book: 'Birth to Death and Points in Between: A book of poems, perceptions, reflections, and inspiration' will be published mid-year by Friesen Press. In the meantime, I'll keep posting here. Regards Mel

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