Mel Gill Poet Rhyme

Catch the Clouds

Catch the Clouds
	As they drift by
The moist mist kissed
	In dream blue high
Catch the clouds in
	The sweet salt snare of
A woman’s womb
	A cozy room
Catch the clouds 
	If you care
Catch the moist seed
	Plant it deep
Bring the moist need
	From its 
		Dreamy sleep

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Brian Sambourne May 24, 2020 at 10:20 PM Another winner of a poem. I especially like the repetition of the word 'moist.' Powerful. A wonderful, thoughtful verse. Regards. Brian

Darlene De Beaulieu October 9, 2019 at 5:21 PM Hello Mel Gill, I am a cloud watcher. i like the shapes of the clouds. Have a nice day my friend.This will be my fav. have a nice day my friend.

Edmund Strempfl October 4, 2019 at 5:50 PM The expression got my attention and enjoyed

Franci Hoffman October 1, 2019 at 4:41 PM Excellent pace and rhyme!

Richard Lamoureux July 9, 2019 at 7:11 AM Interesting use of metaphor.

Panagiota Romios February 15, 2019 at 4:15 AM Wow~ Phil! I can see why your poems will be published! This is truly beautiful! I take photos of clouds whenever I can. Rainbows, too.. All Fascinate me ~no end. So glad you are posting here! Thank you. Panagiota

Phil Capitano February 1, 2019 at 7:16 AM Very cool Mel, love watching the clouds form into shapes and dreaming...Keep up the good work. Mel Gill February 1, 2019 at 7:24 AM Thanks, Phil. My book: 'Birth to Death and Points in Between: A book of poems, perceptions, reflections, and inspiration' will be published mid-year by Friesen Press. In the meantime, I'll keep posting here. Regards Mel